Honestly, the writing quality and character design are both 1 star and the rest doesn't matter. The chapters are doubled or tripled and sentences are off. But worse of all, the main character thinks he will die if his cover is blown. So what does he do? Literally tries to destroy his cover at every single moment that he can, the plot relying on coincidences and a support character to keep kicking him back in line only for him to try and die a few steps later. And this isn't supposed to be a suicidal character but one that "tries" to survive despite his morals and personality being trampled on. I'm sorry, but this has so uniquely failed at what it is trying to establish that I have lost faith in the rest of the story being satisfying or even interesting in any way, even for the p*rn.
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