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Kartikey_Kushwaha_5103
Kartikey_Kushwaha_5103Lv21yr
2023-02-23 17:13

the MC is truly a beta that makes me punch him if he would exist in real life. And author basically you placing mc in body of final villain but he never acts as one he is truly stupid

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Kartikey_Kushwaha_5103
Kartikey_Kushwaha_5103Lv2

no I dropped it after that chapter because I know MC will play on the fingers of others and will have power to do nothing on his own

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Kartikey_Kushwaha_5103
Kartikey_Kushwaha_5103Lv2

WELL I HAVE MANY RECOMENDATIONS BUT ALL OF THEM ARE IN INITIAL STAGES AND IF YOU WANT TO READ YOU CAN READ VILLANEOUS YOUNG MASTER OTHERWORLDLY HAREM IT IS AVAILABLE FOR FREE IN Panda novel.com

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shirou_sureiya
shirou_sureiyaLv4

just because he or she title or place the body of villain in the story doesn't he or she is villain

shirou_sureiya
shirou_sureiyaLv4

dont tell me if you are place in the body of gay you will become gay

darkking496
darkking496Lv1

It might be but the Author responded to one of my comments by saying that basically the MC won't become any better till 30-33 and that's when the story requires stones so take that as you will.

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Folfy
FolfyLv13

Didn’ t that turn ntr

Kartikey_Kushwaha_5103:WELL I HAVE MANY RECOMENDATIONS BUT ALL OF THEM ARE IN INITIAL STAGES AND IF YOU WANT TO READ YOU CAN READ VILLANEOUS YOUNG MASTER OTHERWORLDLY HAREM IT IS AVAILABLE FOR FREE IN Panda novel.com
H3LI0S
H3LI0SLv13

seriously, can you spoil me the context,

Folfy:Didn’ t that turn ntr
Folfy
FolfyLv13

Basically the mc allowed his harem girl to be with another I found this out by checking the reviews of the novel

H3LI0S:seriously, can you spoil me the context,
Celestial_Zero24
Celestial_Zero24Lv4

NTR Hahah

Kartikey_Kushwaha_5103:WELL I HAVE MANY RECOMENDATIONS BUT ALL OF THEM ARE IN INITIAL STAGES AND IF YOU WANT TO READ YOU CAN READ VILLANEOUS YOUNG MASTER OTHERWORLDLY HAREM IT IS AVAILABLE FOR FREE IN Panda novel.com
Azrael_DAngel
Azrael_DAngelLv14

actually,that novel is rewritten of his previous work, and in reviews they're talking about his previous work, and even in his last work she was not mc's harem member...she was just one of the heroines of the novel in which mc transmigrated,,,, but in the rewritten she is in mc harem and there is no ntr..... sorry for bad english

Folfy:Basically the mc allowed his harem girl to be with another I found this out by checking the reviews of the novel
Folfy
FolfyLv13

Ohhh thanks for clearing that up

Azrael_DAngel:actually,that novel is rewritten of his previous work, and in reviews they're talking about his previous work, and even in his last work she was not mc's harem member...she was just one of the heroines of the novel in which mc transmigrated,,,, but in the rewritten she is in mc harem and there is no ntr..... sorry for bad english
Azrael_DAngel
Azrael_DAngelLv14

nah forget that comment there is seriously ntr there,, even in his rewritten so I suggest to not reading this,,, I got confused cause it been a long time since I caught of on ch 150, today I read after that and found out he has done the same as he did in previous work

Folfy:Ohhh thanks for clearing that up
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Folfy
FolfyLv13

I see thank you I was seriously thinking reading that that tomorrow.

Azrael_DAngel:nah forget that comment there is seriously ntr there,, even in his rewritten so I suggest to not reading this,,, I got confused cause it been a long time since I caught of on ch 150, today I read after that and found out he has done the same as he did in previous work
Kartikey_Kushwaha_5103
Kartikey_Kushwaha_5103Lv2

bro there is no ntr if I remember correctly in that book and that particular girl never placed in mc harem so technically it was not ntr. Not every girl that was represented as heroine can be in his harem some of them are just one time

Azrael_DAngel:nah forget that comment there is seriously ntr there,, even in his rewritten so I suggest to not reading this,,, I got confused cause it been a long time since I caught of on ch 150, today I read after that and found out he has done the same as he did in previous work
Kartikey_Kushwaha_5103
Kartikey_Kushwaha_5103Lv2

My point is that when you have power source why will you not work as villain you put a logic of gay but that cant prove your point because that is his sexual preference but here we want a clever person as villain who at least can use the resources he have rather than leaving everything to fate in attempt to save his life till post novel period. He is a total beta and this novels proves it in start so I dont think there is any point in reading it further because even author do his character development he can only put minute changes in his way of thinking.

shirou_sureiya:just because he or she title or place the body of villain in the story doesn't he or she is villain
Garuda370
Garuda370Lv3

I BECOME PROTAGONIST FATHER?

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OuterGodACSqts
OuterGodACSqtsLv13

Villain retirement.

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