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Jollybee
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2023-05-13 05:37

One of the most infuriating novels you will touch, zero realistic ideas. The mc is Perpetually 12. Dont worry hes not a mc hes just a small brain kid with the brain of a 30 year old that acts like a 3 year old. Dont worry mc has been shot but hes fine, dont worry mc doesn't trust no body. Except any person he meets till they shoot or bite him. Dont worry mc has no eq. Just dont read this, author other works are great. But this one has well garbage. He had an infinite space that keeps time still, he doesn't use it much. His system is money based, he has yet to gain any money in 3 months so he will lose the system eventually. The author has zero medical understanding nor wepon understanding. Like the mc gets a tourniquet left on his arm for 8 hrs. And he decides to use a dessert eagle as his main wepon at 12 years old... with 1 arm... It follows TWD storyline with zero changes. Time skips are non existence. So if you want to read about a 12 year old 30 year old mc with zero knowledge "but he can get it its just the system is busted not available yet" with plot armor that lets him get shot every time he turns around. He regrets things hes done countless times, "hes gotten over it but still regrets smh". 0/10 i tried to read to release out of sheer will but i couldn't do it. Whats really sad is its really well written .... like i spot zero grammar issues which is lovely. Just the premise is god awful.

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Forced drama....

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