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CopyPaste1
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2022-03-28 16:18

the idea is good but the way author writing and the errors make the story confusing. if the author can edit hia work this will be much better

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Jasmer
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did the most dangerous critic come to see my work? It may be difficult for me to correct errors in the text, since this is not my native language, so after the translation I no longer have the strength to do anything, what about the manner of narration, it may change in the future

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