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bigpollo
bigpolloLv142yr
2021-11-22 18:58

There are so many grammar and spelling errors in this. The character is pretty one-dimensional and is a sociopath rap*st. The world background is okay but issues like names and gender seem to put a toll on the reader’s attention. Meh fanfic.

Reborn as a Bolton

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