I understand this is probably going to be taken down for not having perfect rating like most writers do on this app but I just have to be honest. This story started strong and was interesting for a while but at some point it went from a good story with a good premise to an info dump of useless information and glossing over major world events. for whatever reason America became a cowardly nation that accepts being disrespected by China and is scared of a collapsing Spain that is in open Civil War and accepts Americans being murder, despite being this economic and military superpower. It's a story based around the U.S but the only interesting things that are happening is in France. the entire story is constantly being spoiled by the writer because for whatever reason tells you exactly what happens before going into slightly more detail in the next 2 chapters. So everything that goes on in the story doesn't come as a surprise unless you are constantly skipping chapters. The main character was relegated to a side character that is rarely if ever mentioned. After the Revolutionary War this story just falls off hard. Apparently the chapters about the French war is from another writer so most interesting progress that's happening in the story is from someone else.
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