This is a very good novel in terms of plot and creativity. The writer's intentions are clear and though vampire novels are insanely common and cliche it's admirable that the author managed to make their's unique. However, the novel is plagued by multiple errors. It started nicely but as I read on, few errors turned into multiple errors. There's not a lot if issues with grammar but some sentences lack end marks. The story lacked a proper flow and the writer went from scene to scene without any proper transitions. As a result, I was a bit confused while reading some paragraphs. Some things mentioned in the novel were a bit contradictory and it seemed as though the author was trying to pack multiple details in a single chapter. Overall, from the synopsis, it's clear this novel will be very interesting. It has a lot of potential but the author needs to work on the flow. All the best with your writing. [img=recommend]
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LIKEAlso, I think this novel is under the wrong genre. I think Fantasy Romance would be a better fit since you're dealing with the supernatural.
Thank you for taking the time the read my work. I will work on that, ASAP.
