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KillingmeSoftly
KillingmeSoftlyLv33yr
2021-05-14 20:59

Author are you going to dig deep in the power of the laws cause in the original we didn't get to see the full extent of the powers of sin so are going to make changes so that we get to see leylin and the magus alliance use their laws to their full potential?

Warlock of the Magus World – Redux

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TunaSandwichAddict
TunaSandwichAddictAuthor

Remember I wont change major ocurrences in plot. However, I will strive to make fights and cultivation more interesting, and be sure that Ill make Leylin abuse his power ONLY whe it is safe for him to do so.

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TheComedy_Mask
TheComedy_MaskLv3

will take keep the romance in it or his marriage

TunaSandwichAddict:Remember I wont change major ocurrences in plot. However, I will strive to make fights and cultivation more interesting, and be sure that Ill make Leylin abuse his power ONLY whe it is safe for him to do so.
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TunaSandwichAddict
TunaSandwichAddictAuthor

romance no, marriage yes

TheComedy_Mask:will take keep the romance in it or his marriage
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TheComedy_Mask
TheComedy_MaskLv3

so he's still gonna have his children i supopose

TunaSandwichAddict:romance no, marriage yes
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TheComedy_Mask
TheComedy_MaskLv3

well i just hope that he would get rid of those women after there use is over and doesn't bring every women he finds like when he brought back those three women from the shadow world one of them had oure blood the other two were just useless i think it's useless and stulpidto even let them live as well as that snake dowager i mean he was an ant to her but he defeated doesn't that mean she has fair chance kf getting revenge in the future even more then him when tricked her

TunaSandwichAddict:romance no, marriage yes
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TunaSandwichAddict
TunaSandwichAddictAuthor

Don't worry, I share your grievances toward the original in that regard. I plan to solve those issues, once we eventually reach that part of the story.

TheComedy_Mask:well i just hope that he would get rid of those women after there use is over and doesn't bring every women he finds like when he brought back those three women from the shadow world one of them had oure blood the other two were just useless i think it's useless and stulpidto even let them live as well as that snake dowager i mean he was an ant to her but he defeated doesn't that mean she has fair chance kf getting revenge in the future even more then him when tricked her
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TheComedy_Mask
TheComedy_MaskLv3

thanks lot men your the goat to be honest I planning on rewriting birth of the demonic sword in summer if no does it and am planning on making him truly evil and not an idiot who will do what girl tell's him just because she keeps yelling and following him i would've killed her let alone help or give her an inheritance so if do write it i will make make deal with royals to get bunch darkness spells rather then giving it to jane

TunaSandwichAddict:Don't worry, I share your grievances toward the original in that regard. I plan to solve those issues, once we eventually reach that part of the story.
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Skull_of_Life
Skull_of_LifeLv3

Do you still have such plans?

TheComedy_Mask:thanks lot men your the goat to be honest I planning on rewriting birth of the demonic sword in summer if no does it and am planning on making him truly evil and not an idiot who will do what girl tell's him just because she keeps yelling and following him i would've killed her let alone help or give her an inheritance so if do write it i will make make deal with royals to get bunch darkness spells rather then giving it to jane
2mth
TheComedy_Mask
TheComedy_MaskLv3

i do but i am trying to write an original one before i am making the plot characters and stories and so on right but I'll make it after i make my first novel i can give you some novel recommendations if you want i have over 60

Skull_of_Life:Do you still have such plans?
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Skull_of_Life
Skull_of_LifeLv3

Come on. Warning: I don't like fake villains, I hate systems, but there are exceptions.

TheComedy_Mask:i do but i am trying to write an original one before i am making the plot characters and stories and so on right but I'll make it after i make my first novel i can give you some novel recommendations if you want i have over 60
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TheComedy_Mask
TheComedy_MaskLv3

okay your'relike me , i also hate systems and fake villanins as well as annoying charachters so i am gonna give you this list _ Solitrary warrior honestly one of my favorites disaster border reincarnation paradise questioning heaven konoha hypocrite the world below the surface (haven't read this one yet ) hell app state of decay big bodhi can a scholar be called a villain lord of glory extreme eternal demon immortal demon greed all for what cursed immortality ( i am at chapter 80 and it's going good so far ) sword go in a magic world ( he doesn't start as a villain but he does become ruthless and slowly becomes a monster) note : i haven't read these ones's below yet death benefit infinite battle nigh evolution it all starts with wizard world epid of the demonic shaman the mage of eternity the world of martial arts global demon and tenebroom so some these are MTL so you have to endure some bad grammar here and there but yeah these are most of what i have enjoy

Skull_of_Life:Come on. Warning: I don't like fake villains, I hate systems, but there are exceptions.
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Skull_of_Life
Skull_of_LifeLv3

Thank you, the best of your list I've read, or started reading, here's my list: Way of the Cultivator The Game of A Blood Mage Evil Abyss Mage A Man's Insanity: A Changing World Douluo Dalu: Sovereign

TheComedy_Mask:okay your'relike me , i also hate systems and fake villanins as well as annoying charachters so i am gonna give you this list _ Solitrary warrior honestly one of my favorites disaster border reincarnation paradise questioning heaven konoha hypocrite the world below the surface (haven't read this one yet ) hell app state of decay big bodhi can a scholar be called a villain lord of glory extreme eternal demon immortal demon greed all for what cursed immortality ( i am at chapter 80 and it's going good so far ) sword go in a magic world ( he doesn't start as a villain but he does become ruthless and slowly becomes a monster) note : i haven't read these ones's below yet death benefit infinite battle nigh evolution it all starts with wizard world epid of the demonic shaman the mage of eternity the world of martial arts global demon and tenebroom so some these are MTL so you have to endure some bad grammar here and there but yeah these are most of what i have enjoy
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TheComedy_Mask
TheComedy_MaskLv3

thanks a lot

Skull_of_Life:Thank you, the best of your list I've read, or started reading, here's my list: Way of the Cultivator The Game of A Blood Mage Evil Abyss Mage A Man's Insanity: A Changing World Douluo Dalu: Sovereign
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Rival789
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Within the first chapter, I already liked the story much better than the original. Giving the AI an actual personality and name makes the interactions between them interesting and fun, especially when they scheme together, and gives us, the readers an emotional attachment to her. The revamped AI vs the original is like comparing an EV to a toaster, just that much better. I really like the new Leylins personality, he is arrogant, but doesn't suffer the curse of typical CN characters and spouting about 'courting death'. He knows he is weak and is making plans to get stronger. If you have read the original, you will inevitably know what happens, but I think this is much better overall. Can't wait for more chapters

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SadFrostie
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I like it, dont drop this. ...................................................................................................................

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Sculp
SculpLv12

keep it up author I had read the original vut didnt finish it, Thanks for your efforts.........................................................................................................................................................................................................

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Sloth_King21
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Keep up the good work. I like this leylin much better [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Kaisen1
Kaisen1Lv4

I haven't started reading it yet but it doesn't stop me from rating it 5 stars. the synopsis is the answer to my prayer. no romance with a.i./system and will not have its own physical body. i feel like kira when he cummed to mona lisa's hand

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Monarch_Of_Hell
Monarch_Of_HellLv4

AUTHOOOOOOR WAKEEEE UPPP!!! ITS BEEN 19DAYSSSSSSSS WHERE R YAAAAAAA!?[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

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Panda343
Panda343Lv2

this is better then the other Warlock of the Magus World fanfiction i have seen the mc is much more evil unlike the original mc the only problem is that auther of the novel is not updateing the chapter regularly and all in all the story is good keep it up auther and don't drooped it plz[img=faceslap]

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ShadowlessMoon
ShadowlessMoonLv4

Solid 5 stars story.It's a gem hiding in dirt.Read it and see if it suits your style, you'l probably like it though if you are bored of the super op mc's in different fanfics. First five or six chapters shouldn't take more than five minutes to read so you can give it a try.Also again the Author's mind is the best.Love ya Author<3<3<3

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Sloth_King21
Sloth_King21Lv4

Love this leylin better than the original. Keep it up author. You are awesome [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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