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I Reincarnated In G.I Joe

Just_for_fun1997
4.4
117 Chs

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Melshan
MelshanLv7

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Lutheris_right
Lutheris_rightLv2

I was actually very excited to read this book but as soon as I started reading it, I realized that maybe I was too overexcited. For a person who likes reading decent Grammar in a story, I was frustrated by just reading the first three chapters!! It makes me wonder whether English is truly been forsake because there's just too many novels here that lack of it's proper, Grammatical, way of writing.

2yr
Robert_Pippin
Robert_PippinLv4

劇透

2yr
Insane_Pumpkin
Insane_PumpkinLv10

Good, idea, decent ploot but the grammar is tragic. If it was misspeled words or problems with he, she, it etc... then it would be ok but this fanfic here lacks entire words from the sentences...

2yr
AoMaEr
AoMaErLv4

I really like your works.. first The TO/Legacies then the Lorien Legacies(I am number 4) then this Fast and Furious combine with GI Joe... You are writing fantics of all the fics, movies, shows that I like and they are good .. Hope you don't drop them and continue them.. Waiting for more chapters...

2yr
Ulan8055
Ulan8055Lv3

劇透

2yr
Godack
GodackLv2

Should consider doing a rewrite of the first dozen chapters, you are spelling the words correctly but you are also forgetting to use some words at the same time. Sentences go on for a bit too long, some could use a comma and others would be better if you put a full stop there instead of a comma. I also recommend to change your format a little bit, for example you start sentences with : 'He answered "Yes."' instead of '"Yes." He answered'. The character himself is a bit too energetic for realism, but this story isn't really written as a what if situation and more of a this is what I think I would do in a situation. The story itself is more original than most of the stories on this forsaken website, but the over al quality doesn't make it stick out enough. A rewrite is easy enough but because I guess English is your second+ language I can understand it being difficult. The only problem I actually do have with this story is that I see really old comments and reviews about the grammar and it not being correct in the chapters. Doesn't give a good impression, but alas, you write for fun and practice...

2yr
Nymos_lvl9000
Nymos_lvl9000Lv3

well i really liked it i hope you keep updating it regularly and keep this quality to get worse well i really liked it i hope you keep updating it regularly and keep this quality to get worse [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

2yr
Patrick_hell123
Patrick_hell123Lv15

I like your storytelling it's very interesting to listen to

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