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HolyDragon17
HolyDragon17Lv43yr
2020-12-03 08:53

Not even 100 chapters in Raws and I am already vomiting blood. I get that the Author may be a new writer (If I read machine translation correctly) But dang story-wise it's bad. I grit my teeth when he joined the 'adventure guild' . It's going further away from being 'merchant'. Just full of cliches

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WasteOfOxygen
WasteOfOxygenLv2

I was the same as you in the first 100 chapters, I couldn't help but almost vomit blood even when I took into consideration that the author may have been a new writer that time. The whole story went on like this for a few hundred more chapters, I just read it to pass the time when I was bored. Oh and one more thing, the title isn't actually supposed to be "Fey Evolution Merchant", it's supposed to be something else but translators did a real sh***y job 🙄

icefire96
icefire96Lv1

un comerciante se une al gremio de aventureros ..ahh eso si es muy cliché nada original...

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