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C0nstance
C0nstanceAuthor3yr
2020-11-23 13:41

YO! Author here, making my obligatory review as custom dictates. To all the new readers. finding this book. I welcome you! So then getting to the point, what's the story about and why should I read this? :In short its about fighting against Fate and 'Them'. To change the past, advance his 'plans' and ultimately plot the destruction of these 'ultimate beings' who purpose is to manipulate the Universe and control the lives of everyone in it. All for their entertainment. The MC is an emotionless, apathetic person who is determined to advance his plans, even if it costs him his life. A person who wouldn't hesitate to sacrifice an entire species, if it is of use for his plans. A person who had no bottom lines in his morality. So if you like a story filled with mystery and a greater goal, coupled with an MC who strives for this goal, no matter the cost. Then I think you will enjoy this story. (think of the MC to be like Fang Yuan.) All supporting characters also have their unique personalities and lives outside of the MC. In fact, each character has the potential to be the MC, therefore their perspectives, thought processes, and ideals will also be frequently seen. (you will understand what I'm talking about as you continue reading, which I hope you would!) ----------- Volume 1's pacing is a 'tiny-bit' slow, but I assure you every event in it is of great significance. (either for character development or for the latter parts of the story.) I know that my punctuations and grammar isn't the best in the first few chapters, but I assure you, it improves by a ton in the later chapters(around c20-ish?). Makes you wonder if it's written by the same person. Updates will be consistent with an average of 14 chapters a week. At lest 7, if I'm busy with school stuff. I hope you enjoy reading and would appreciate your feedback and support!

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Purple_Khaos
Purple_KhaosLv14

Yes he(MC) really gives the Fang Yuan vibe rather than the Leylin Farlier vibe

Noire_Nova
Noire_NovaLv12

I have yet to read it, but from the sounds of things, it might be quite interesting. The #late-romance tag concerns me however. I don’t care if the romance is after 10 years or 10,000 years, the fact of the matter is, it will exist. This kind of goes against the ‘apathetic’ description you placed upon the protagonist and dampens my intrest. If I read this, I want to know when abouts the romance is, so I can detach myself from the story by that point and drop it. I am unsure whether or not the author is indeed the one who applied the tag, so please provide some clarification so that I may decide on the extent that I will be reading this.

C0nstance
C0nstanceAuthor

Hmmm if I have to approximate a number, then around chapter 400-ish, I guess.(considering I haven’t even completed Vol 1 yet, its far-far off in the future) The main theme of the novel is ‘Fantasy’ therefore romance is merely a subplot and will not be the mainfocus. Do give it a try and tell me what you think. Your honest reviews are much appreciated.

Noire_Nova:I have yet to read it, but from the sounds of things, it might be quite interesting. The #late-romance tag concerns me however. I don’t care if the romance is after 10 years or 10,000 years, the fact of the matter is, it will exist. This kind of goes against the ‘apathetic’ description you placed upon the protagonist and dampens my intrest. If I read this, I want to know when abouts the romance is, so I can detach myself from the story by that point and drop it. I am unsure whether or not the author is indeed the one who applied the tag, so please provide some clarification so that I may decide on the extent that I will be reading this.
Rayama
RayamaLv4

No romance, I assume?

C0nstance:Hmmm if I have to approximate a number, then around chapter 400-ish, I guess.(considering I haven’t even completed Vol 1 yet, its far-far off in the future) The main theme of the novel is ‘Fantasy’ therefore romance is merely a subplot and will not be the mainfocus. Do give it a try and tell me what you think. Your honest reviews are much appreciated.
tobi_matsumoto
tobi_matsumotoLv1

Hey there! I'm new around here and this is definitely a story I want to read more than anything! :D Everything about it has this sort of Sandman vibe and feels like something I can get into.

ChurchofTess7932
ChurchofTess7932Lv14

I'm looking forward to the romance piece! hopefully no harem though, :/

C0nstance:Hmmm if I have to approximate a number, then around chapter 400-ish, I guess.(considering I haven’t even completed Vol 1 yet, its far-far off in the future) The main theme of the novel is ‘Fantasy’ therefore romance is merely a subplot and will not be the mainfocus. Do give it a try and tell me what you think. Your honest reviews are much appreciated.
Amao_Abdulrahman
Amao_AbdulrahmanLv13

Like d info it's really attractive......... Vldkrhuskdkdkdiisjejsksndbdk

ChurchofTess7932
ChurchofTess7932Lv14

Does this have a discord?

Dreygoon_
Dreygoon_Lv2

It suddenly turned from free to pay to read :(

Nikhil_Chand
Nikhil_ChandLv4

so this will be a 1 on 1 power couple right? no harem right?

C0nstance:Hmmm if I have to approximate a number, then around chapter 400-ish, I guess.(considering I haven’t even completed Vol 1 yet, its far-far off in the future) The main theme of the novel is ‘Fantasy’ therefore romance is merely a subplot and will not be the mainfocus. Do give it a try and tell me what you think. Your honest reviews are much appreciated.
C0nstance
C0nstanceAuthor

Most probably... Yes. I'm not really experienced in writing complicated relationships or dramas. Nor am I willing to. As I previously stated, Romance is merely a subplot. The true focus is on the story and its plot. TLDR; It will be MC x one girl. Two at most(depending on how the story progresses.) There will definitely NOT be more than two girls in a relationship with the MC. Try giving it a read and let me know your thoughts in a review.

Nikhil_Chand:so this will be a 1 on 1 power couple right? no harem right?
anime_321321
anime_321321Lv1

I think 2 girls and mc is ok but anymore may effect the story in a bad way if not done correctly like previous amazing novels. Oh yeah i think some sci-fi elements should be added in fights eg: 2 peaple with power to control hydrogen and compression to cuase masive nuclear explosions. Love the novel and character growth mc and people around him👍👍👍👍👍 I hope that the mc starts caring for like 3 people and can stay emotionless for any other.

C0nstance:Most probably... Yes. I'm not really experienced in writing complicated relationships or dramas. Nor am I willing to. As I previously stated, Romance is merely a subplot. The true focus is on the story and its plot. TLDR; It will be MC x one girl. Two at most(depending on how the story progresses.) There will definitely NOT be more than two girls in a relationship with the MC. Try giving it a read and let me know your thoughts in a review.
uzair_playz
uzair_playzLv1

Yeah and i think it should be at least 2 girls otherwise some scenes where the girl development were would get wasted. Eg Olivia getting stronger

anime_321321:I think 2 girls and mc is ok but anymore may effect the story in a bad way if not done correctly like previous amazing novels. Oh yeah i think some sci-fi elements should be added in fights eg: 2 peaple with power to control hydrogen and compression to cuase masive nuclear explosions. Love the novel and character growth mc and people around him👍👍👍👍👍 I hope that the mc starts caring for like 3 people and can stay emotionless for any other.
uzair_playz
uzair_playzLv1

I mean he was already married and then there is Olivia etc so it kinda makes all the build up useless if he has only one.

uzair_playz:Yeah and i think it should be at least 2 girls otherwise some scenes where the girl development were would get wasted. Eg Olivia getting stronger
C0nstance
C0nstanceAuthor

Thanks for your suggestion. Don't worry, the sci-fi elements will be present during fights. After all, it is mankind's greatest strength. I shall also try my best to not mess up the MC's relationships. I hope not to disappoint my readers. (and also myself.)

anime_321321:I think 2 girls and mc is ok but anymore may effect the story in a bad way if not done correctly like previous amazing novels. Oh yeah i think some sci-fi elements should be added in fights eg: 2 peaple with power to control hydrogen and compression to cuase masive nuclear explosions. Love the novel and character growth mc and people around him👍👍👍👍👍 I hope that the mc starts caring for like 3 people and can stay emotionless for any other.
He_is_cruel
He_is_cruelLv13

Love the novel and character growth of mc and how he is slowing developing emotions but for people who were close to him. If he was completely evil than the character development and emotions got to waste. I hope the mc doesn't develop one of those twisted relationships etc like from great demo n system etc because i think it ruin the familiarity of the character. I love Souless whitch yes because olivia looks like will only care for lucuis when i say twisted it means abadoning the person becuase he or she is becomes usless after caring only for u eg olivia. Any other person the mc can act like how he usually does. I really enjoy your novel and i hope you want your novel to be the way you like [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Leon_Luis_
Leon_Luis_Lv4

it got removed now (the tag) but thanks for telling us about it I have similar opinion related to romance too I don't like it in fact I hate it I just want to throw my phone(yeah I use mobile app to read novel) at some wall or something everytime they make a cold character fall in 'love'(I call it lust) so I will keep that in mind when I read this series' too so I don't get my hopes up

Noire_Nova:I have yet to read it, but from the sounds of things, it might be quite interesting. The #late-romance tag concerns me however. I don’t care if the romance is after 10 years or 10,000 years, the fact of the matter is, it will exist. This kind of goes against the ‘apathetic’ description you placed upon the protagonist and dampens my intrest. If I read this, I want to know when abouts the romance is, so I can detach myself from the story by that point and drop it. I am unsure whether or not the author is indeed the one who applied the tag, so please provide some clarification so that I may decide on the extent that I will be reading this.
L_6
L_6Lv11

I have only just found this and not even read a single word of it het but i feel obliged to do so as the main character and my name are the same therefore i give this novel a 10/10 would recommend

Nana1960
Nana1960Lv2

Well now I am going to start reading the story...sorry but I usually like to read the comments section to figure out if a story is worth reading. Hope it won't turn too disappointing.

Daoist91BA2b
Daoist91BA2bLv1

Hey author can you spoil your readers 😂 who will be the wife of lucius A. Olivia B. Reyna

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CulturedReaderacc1
CulturedReaderacc1Lv2

I see the potential and think it is worth you trying it. It has not only entertained my interest, but it also hooked me - who has read 30,000+ chapters of novels, comics+200hours of shows - because it felt quite fresh and a properly written, defined, complete book [img=recommend]. And the stars I have given are not cheap, as this story really deserves recognition. So I will talk about this while in the most honest way I can express myself : It's a little rough at the start but the writing definitely improves. The story is proceeding in a defined direction, the events have a cause and effect at the same time veeery entertaining, while the characters feel like real people and intrigue me as well as make me invest in them- all of these make me invested in it. Grammar is relatively proper and only has minor typos, but definitely not a problem mind you. The power system is mature and definitely a positive point of the story. Regarding the protagonist, he is not evil nor good and not as simple as he presents himself to the other characters, and to us the readers. We will slowly unveil his past, the mystery of his origins, his relationships, and the future that he hopes to achieve by fighting against "Them". I welcome you to read it because while it is the author's first book, it is pretty great for the first novel for me and I enjoyed the story regardless of any criticism I had. It has kept me and my picky tastes. The updates are constant and applaudable too. For the author, good job and just maintain the story on it's upwards cycle! Keep it up! For other reviewers, read enough chapters first before giving a review so you can give an accurate opinion even if you disagree, and please don't impose expectations of other books onto this, as those and this are totally different. Try to see it for what it really is. Also. Don't! Spam! - It buries helpful and real opinions.

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