YO! Author here, making my obligatory review as custom dictates. To all the new readers. finding this book. I welcome you! So then getting to the point, what's the story about and why should I read this? :In short its about fighting against Fate and 'Them'. To change the past, advance his 'plans' and ultimately plot the destruction of these 'ultimate beings' who purpose is to manipulate the Universe and control the lives of everyone in it. All for their entertainment. The MC is an emotionless, apathetic person who is determined to advance his plans, even if it costs him his life. A person who wouldn't hesitate to sacrifice an entire species, if it is of use for his plans. A person who had no bottom lines in his morality. So if you like a story filled with mystery and a greater goal, coupled with an MC who strives for this goal, no matter the cost. Then I think you will enjoy this story. (think of the MC to be like Fang Yuan.) All supporting characters also have their unique personalities and lives outside of the MC. In fact, each character has the potential to be the MC, therefore their perspectives, thought processes, and ideals will also be frequently seen. (you will understand what I'm talking about as you continue reading, which I hope you would!) ----------- Volume 1's pacing is a 'tiny-bit' slow, but I assure you every event in it is of great significance. (either for character development or for the latter parts of the story.) I know that my punctuations and grammar isn't the best in the first few chapters, but I assure you, it improves by a ton in the later chapters(around c20-ish?). Makes you wonder if it's written by the same person. Updates will be consistent with an average of 14 chapters a week. At lest 7, if I'm busy with school stuff. I hope you enjoy reading and would appreciate your feedback and support!
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LIKEI have yet to read it, but from the sounds of things, it might be quite interesting. The #late-romance tag concerns me however. I don’t care if the romance is after 10 years or 10,000 years, the fact of the matter is, it will exist. This kind of goes against the ‘apathetic’ description you placed upon the protagonist and dampens my intrest. If I read this, I want to know when abouts the romance is, so I can detach myself from the story by that point and drop it. I am unsure whether or not the author is indeed the one who applied the tag, so please provide some clarification so that I may decide on the extent that I will be reading this.
Hmmm if I have to approximate a number, then around chapter 400-ish, I guess.(considering I haven’t even completed Vol 1 yet, its far-far off in the future) The main theme of the novel is ‘Fantasy’ therefore romance is merely a subplot and will not be the mainfocus. Do give it a try and tell me what you think. Your honest reviews are much appreciated.
Noire_Nova:I have yet to read it, but from the sounds of things, it might be quite interesting. The #late-romance tag concerns me however. I don’t care if the romance is after 10 years or 10,000 years, the fact of the matter is, it will exist. This kind of goes against the ‘apathetic’ description you placed upon the protagonist and dampens my intrest. If I read this, I want to know when abouts the romance is, so I can detach myself from the story by that point and drop it. I am unsure whether or not the author is indeed the one who applied the tag, so please provide some clarification so that I may decide on the extent that I will be reading this.
No romance, I assume?
C0nstance:Hmmm if I have to approximate a number, then around chapter 400-ish, I guess.(considering I haven’t even completed Vol 1 yet, its far-far off in the future) The main theme of the novel is ‘Fantasy’ therefore romance is merely a subplot and will not be the mainfocus. Do give it a try and tell me what you think. Your honest reviews are much appreciated.
I'm looking forward to the romance piece! hopefully no harem though, :/
C0nstance:Hmmm if I have to approximate a number, then around chapter 400-ish, I guess.(considering I haven’t even completed Vol 1 yet, its far-far off in the future) The main theme of the novel is ‘Fantasy’ therefore romance is merely a subplot and will not be the mainfocus. Do give it a try and tell me what you think. Your honest reviews are much appreciated.
so this will be a 1 on 1 power couple right? no harem right?
C0nstance:Hmmm if I have to approximate a number, then around chapter 400-ish, I guess.(considering I haven’t even completed Vol 1 yet, its far-far off in the future) The main theme of the novel is ‘Fantasy’ therefore romance is merely a subplot and will not be the mainfocus. Do give it a try and tell me what you think. Your honest reviews are much appreciated.
Most probably... Yes. I'm not really experienced in writing complicated relationships or dramas. Nor am I willing to. As I previously stated, Romance is merely a subplot. The true focus is on the story and its plot. TLDR; It will be MC x one girl. Two at most(depending on how the story progresses.) There will definitely NOT be more than two girls in a relationship with the MC. Try giving it a read and let me know your thoughts in a review.
Nikhil_Chand:so this will be a 1 on 1 power couple right? no harem right?
I think 2 girls and mc is ok but anymore may effect the story in a bad way if not done correctly like previous amazing novels. Oh yeah i think some sci-fi elements should be added in fights eg: 2 peaple with power to control hydrogen and compression to cuase masive nuclear explosions. Love the novel and character growth mc and people around him👍👍👍👍👍 I hope that the mc starts caring for like 3 people and can stay emotionless for any other.
C0nstance:Most probably... Yes. I'm not really experienced in writing complicated relationships or dramas. Nor am I willing to. As I previously stated, Romance is merely a subplot. The true focus is on the story and its plot. TLDR; It will be MC x one girl. Two at most(depending on how the story progresses.) There will definitely NOT be more than two girls in a relationship with the MC. Try giving it a read and let me know your thoughts in a review.
Yeah and i think it should be at least 2 girls otherwise some scenes where the girl development were would get wasted. Eg Olivia getting stronger
anime_321321:I think 2 girls and mc is ok but anymore may effect the story in a bad way if not done correctly like previous amazing novels. Oh yeah i think some sci-fi elements should be added in fights eg: 2 peaple with power to control hydrogen and compression to cuase masive nuclear explosions. Love the novel and character growth mc and people around him👍👍👍👍👍 I hope that the mc starts caring for like 3 people and can stay emotionless for any other.
Thanks for your suggestion. Don't worry, the sci-fi elements will be present during fights. After all, it is mankind's greatest strength. I shall also try my best to not mess up the MC's relationships. I hope not to disappoint my readers. (and also myself.)
anime_321321:I think 2 girls and mc is ok but anymore may effect the story in a bad way if not done correctly like previous amazing novels. Oh yeah i think some sci-fi elements should be added in fights eg: 2 peaple with power to control hydrogen and compression to cuase masive nuclear explosions. Love the novel and character growth mc and people around him👍👍👍👍👍 I hope that the mc starts caring for like 3 people and can stay emotionless for any other.
Love the novel and character growth of mc and how he is slowing developing emotions but for people who were close to him. If he was completely evil than the character development and emotions got to waste. I hope the mc doesn't develop one of those twisted relationships etc like from great demo n system etc because i think it ruin the familiarity of the character. I love Souless whitch yes because olivia looks like will only care for lucuis when i say twisted it means abadoning the person becuase he or she is becomes usless after caring only for u eg olivia. Any other person the mc can act like how he usually does. I really enjoy your novel and i hope you want your novel to be the way you like [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
it got removed now (the tag) but thanks for telling us about it I have similar opinion related to romance too I don't like it in fact I hate it I just want to throw my phone(yeah I use mobile app to read novel) at some wall or something everytime they make a cold character fall in 'love'(I call it lust) so I will keep that in mind when I read this series' too so I don't get my hopes up
Noire_Nova:I have yet to read it, but from the sounds of things, it might be quite interesting. The #late-romance tag concerns me however. I don’t care if the romance is after 10 years or 10,000 years, the fact of the matter is, it will exist. This kind of goes against the ‘apathetic’ description you placed upon the protagonist and dampens my intrest. If I read this, I want to know when abouts the romance is, so I can detach myself from the story by that point and drop it. I am unsure whether or not the author is indeed the one who applied the tag, so please provide some clarification so that I may decide on the extent that I will be reading this.