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Shiro_Crazy
Shiro_CrazyLv14yr
2020-11-04 11:25

I dropped just because of what the author did with nami, I preferred before the remaster. -----------------------------------------------------------------------------

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John_sins1
John_sins1Lv12

What did he do ?

ZiaZombie
ZiaZombieLv11

went back and rewrote the love story that was going on between the MC and Nami, to turn it into more of a sister/brother relationship. Where the author then forced in a new love interest in the span of one chapter. That had no proper character development outside of a eating competition that lead to the main character getting some how super invested over her over one date.

John_sins1:What did he do ?
InnerVoice
InnerVoiceLv6

Everyone want nami or robin cause they’re part of the main crew of the whole anime. The author wish to be different. He tried to write Mc and nami romance cause so many people ask for it but obviously he didn’t like it. Just respect his wishes yeah? Although I do admit he rush the love development between Zeus and booney, however she is pretty cool minus the heart shape lipstick

ZiaZombie:went back and rewrote the love story that was going on between the MC and Nami, to turn it into more of a sister/brother relationship. Where the author then forced in a new love interest in the span of one chapter. That had no proper character development outside of a eating competition that lead to the main character getting some how super invested over her over one date.
Lazy_Apostle
Lazy_ApostleLv3

i agree with you he showed a romantic development between mc and nami making the person like the idea of ​​the two together to cut it out of nowhere

Didnotsky
DidnotskyLv14

But like Nami is 5 And bonney is 9 However boa honcock YALL ALREADY KNOW SHE A 1000000

CodezL
CodezLLv4

but bonney only appeared in 1 single chapter and they already started their romance, while with nami he was already traveling and developing their relationship, he also made the mc become a slave of the celestial dragons.

InnerVoice:Everyone want nami or robin cause they’re part of the main crew of the whole anime. The author wish to be different. He tried to write Mc and nami romance cause so many people ask for it but obviously he didn’t like it. Just respect his wishes yeah? Although I do admit he rush the love development between Zeus and booney, however she is pretty cool minus the heart shape lipstick
InnerVoice
InnerVoiceLv6

He changed his mind mid way. It’s quite unethical but hey, he’s the author and he can do whatever he wish. I do admit that his love for booney was too rushed and came out of nowhere But other than that I kind of ship them

CodezL:but bonney only appeared in 1 single chapter and they already started their romance, while with nami he was already traveling and developing their relationship, he also made the mc become a slave of the celestial dragons.
CodezL
CodezLLv4

You said it yourself, too hasty and forced, and the fact that mc became a slave to the celestial dragons was the last thing I could bear, when that happened I decided to drop the novel.

InnerVoice:He changed his mind mid way. It’s quite unethical but hey, he’s the author and he can do whatever he wish. I do admit that his love for booney was too rushed and came out of nowhere But other than that I kind of ship them
InnerVoice
InnerVoiceLv6

The slave part was fine with me. It was short and help move events along. Sure he could have escaped but then the government would have gone after all his family and friends thus he didn’t. But in the end it is your choice to continue reading or not. I’m not forcing you. May you find a good story to read my friend

CodezL:You said it yourself, too hasty and forced, and the fact that mc became a slave to the celestial dragons was the last thing I could bear, when that happened I decided to drop the novel.
CodezL
CodezLLv4

All his friends were separated hidden in different islands that Kuma sent them, and he could have gone to the island that his father told him, having spent 2 years training there, he could handle it much better but the author screwed up.

InnerVoice:The slave part was fine with me. It was short and help move events along. Sure he could have escaped but then the government would have gone after all his family and friends thus he didn’t. But in the end it is your choice to continue reading or not. I’m not forcing you. May you find a good story to read my friend
Ser_Gamma
Ser_GammaLv13

Hancock is a flat 1 Nami is a 9 Tashigi a 9 Monet an 8 Robin an 8

Didnotsky:But like Nami is 5 And bonney is 9 However boa honcock YALL ALREADY KNOW SHE A 1000000
Didnotsky
DidnotskyLv14

I will respect Ur opinion but stop the cap homie 😂 hancock is THICK

Ser_Gamma:Hancock is a flat 1 Nami is a 9 Tashigi a 9 Monet an 8 Robin an 8
Dotencsure
DotencsureLv3

why do people like to tell they dropped ??

CasualDegenerate
CasualDegenerateLv4

Clout

Dotencsure:why do people like to tell they dropped ??
Saf4
Saf4Lv11

Thanks. This review is really helpful.

Shadow1stUmbra
Shadow1stUmbraLv4

could have just made it a thresome relationships ist not consider harem if its just 2 girls

Starvation
StarvationLv10

Well if they dropped they most certainly do have a reason. And As a potential reader, i most certainly do wish to hear the reason. To know what i'm getting into.

Dotencsure:why do people like to tell they dropped ??
Gabichu_Yeah
Gabichu_YeahLv3

My honest reaction to you giving a 1 to the best One Piece waifu with Yamato in the top2

Ser_Gamma:Hancock is a flat 1 Nami is a 9 Tashigi a 9 Monet an 8 Robin an 8
Ser_Gamma
Ser_GammaLv13

Hancock was great when she was introduced, I agree, but then the luffy bath incident happened and she became a completely ridiculous disappointment. Also didn't know about Yamato back then. She's pretty great too.

Gabichu_Yeah:My honest reaction to you giving a 1 to the best One Piece waifu with Yamato in the top2
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covestar
covestarLv14

That’s not the point, the fact that the changes were made so abruptly was what caused a lot of problems, secondly author did not have to change the chapters, he could have just made the relationship fail somehow instead of going back and re writing because how about the readers that read the previous version? Should they reread? Also the plot was already set, didn’t make sense for the change to come so abruptly, now readers have a hard time adjusting.

InnerVoice:Everyone want nami or robin cause they’re part of the main crew of the whole anime. The author wish to be different. He tried to write Mc and nami romance cause so many people ask for it but obviously he didn’t like it. Just respect his wishes yeah? Although I do admit he rush the love development between Zeus and booney, however she is pretty cool minus the heart shape lipstick
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