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xiaohai_23
xiaohai_23Lv113yr
2021-03-10 14:56

What I like the most about this story is how the characters are so real. They have human struggles and human solutions (or reactions). The mc has a conscience but wants to live (understandable), and he copes with what he got the way he can. The second mc (the fl???) also is really believable and has her priorities and life even before the start of the story (meaning, she wasn't born just as a decoration to the story, she's a whole person, not flat). Grammar is okay, I guess (I'm not the right person to judge that). Vocabulary is broad enough to make you enjoy reading but not too much as to make you stop and check on google what does a word mean, it's the right balance. Overall, a good start. If you start this, you'll find yourself reading on the edge of the chair (or couch, or bed), waiting for the next revelation or big event, your heart pounding as the characters' at the most thrilling moments :D

The Shadow I live With

JustLikeWriting777
4.8
50 Chs

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JustLikeWriting777
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Tysm :D

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FantasyBliss30
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Exactly!! I am too amazed by the characterizations. I just love characters like these. In the gray, but you just love them. You can see their motivations. You know they are not flawless, yet you can easily connect and sympathize with them!

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