Item: The Shadow I live With
Rating: 5
Author: HANA_4345

HANA_4345Lv33yr

2021-12-30 16:23

This story is lit! Finally! After reviewing soooooooooooo many (just to get the idea) stories of the same common tropes (system, transmigration, and romance). There is this gem! I really like how the author narrates the story. There are no tryhard mystery vibes here. The author just writes it so smooth that in your head, itself, adds the mystery vibes! Kudos! Definitely going to add it to my collection!

The Shadow I live With

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