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Lord_Stan
Lord_StanLv34yr
2020-10-16 02:11

started of good. but went downhill after the king came to take him to the capital. didn't like the pacing. chapters just felt like fillers. and the chapters went on getting shorter like sometimes just 5 pages per chapter in which only 4 pages had content and the last one was author's note. I don't mean to diss this novel. just not for me. I like fast paced stories with long chapters which I find very hard to find(I mean good fast paced stories without fillers). I would've only given this a 3 star because of the pacing and the fillers(they really did feel like fillers. I don't know if it has any future significance and idrc since I'm quitting) I gave this a 4 star just so that author don't feel bad. I personally have not written any stories but I know that creating stuff is pretty hard. that's all. thank you

Shadow Emperor in Another World

Dragonjackel
4.5
247 Chs

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Dragonjackel
DragonjackelAuthor

I thank you for your kindness, I can’t promise you will like it but if you read “Once human, now a parasite.” It is pretty fast paced and has longer chapters, by a lot compared to mine.

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Lord_Stan
Lord_StanLv3

thank you. I'll check it out 😁👍

Dragonjackel:I thank you for your kindness, I can’t promise you will like it but if you read “Once human, now a parasite.” It is pretty fast paced and has longer chapters, by a lot compared to mine.
4yr
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Lord_Stan
Lord_StanLv3

gave it a try. didn't regret it. thank you for recommending. 😄🤝

Dragonjackel:I thank you for your kindness, I can’t promise you will like it but if you read “Once human, now a parasite.” It is pretty fast paced and has longer chapters, by a lot compared to mine.
4yr
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Dragonjackel
DragonjackelAuthor

No problem

Lord_Stan:gave it a try. didn't regret it. thank you for recommending. 😄🤝
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Lord_Stan
Lord_StanLv3

you in discord?

Dragonjackel:No problem
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Dragonjackel
DragonjackelAuthor

Yeah

Lord_Stan:you in discord?
4yr
Lord_Stan
Lord_StanLv3

can you add me

Dragonjackel:Yeah
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Dragonjackel
DragonjackelAuthor

Add me first, i dont want you putting your name in the chat for everyone to see Dragongamer1848#3140

Lord_Stan:can you add me
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Lord_Stan
Lord_StanLv3

I just sent you a request. the name's stan

Dragonjackel:Add me first, i dont want you putting your name in the chat for everyone to see Dragongamer1848#3140
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