webnovel
Jlairu
JlairuLv114yr
2020-08-07 14:54

In short it's a nice isekai story from what I have read so far. In depth: Main character's personality can best be described as, an elderly person walking through a zoo. MINOR SPOILERS.. Other characters, lets takes Elva as a representative (sibling) the most striking side character. We didn't learn why she was on a high horse, just that she was, she got her ass beat and we moved on. This was a missed opportunity for character development. Though how the main character doesn't care that the dad reveals his private information, it's nice in that you recognise that the dad exists only to talk about the main character and has no other personal matters to attend to or care about. Didn't explain how the dad has the position to call a king however I shouldn't fuss because it's implicitly tells you. World Background is something that you learn as the story progresses. But as of now 3/5 there hasn't been much care on for the dragons and lizards, THE MAIN CHARACTERS RACE. He just teleported into another realm with what felt like a "oh well here is another dimension that I can freely travel to," then we go back to the starting realm like nothing even happened. That was very out of place. Just some stuff I dislike are: -familiars pets or whatever . A slime goes "Meow," like what the hell. -the unrealistic fact that he got a slime girlfriend almost instantly after meeting her. Relationships shouldn't happen that fast. I honestly hope they breakup first and to have some emotional drama ' like real people' I don't care if they get back together or not. Maybe something interesting happens and he gets with the white dragon or maybe the white dragon gets jealous and kills the slime.

Liked by 6 people

LIKE
Replies5
Jlairu
JlairuLv11

Another thing I'd like to mention is that the power progression of the main character is quick and that the 'training' is really looked over, he doesn't use his fighting style often but when he does I hope I see a speck of imperfection. In addition I hate familiars isn't he a shadow emperor? why does he need weak pets where weak things live to die, and two of them at that. I suppose he is unadjusted to the world or something I hope one of them dies so it teaches him a lesson. Get some character growth or something. Or just disappoint and resurrect with soul magic or some bs.

Chaoticmike
ChaoticmikeLv15

thank you for giving me insight on a trash novel. prevented me from wasting my time. thanks again

Arameus
ArameusLv2

I agree

CriticalReader
CriticalReaderLv2

seems like the novel is a fetish collection

kevin_saputra
kevin_saputraLv3

ughh I really hate romantic emotional dramas, I read fanfic stories whose writers are well off pissing readers off with MC girls but those stories are good ahahhahah

Other Reviews
JohnButts2k
JohnButts2kLv15
balistic757
balistic757Lv5
Related Stories

Level 1 to Infinity: My Bloodline Is the Ultimate Cheat!

They shattered his life. Now, heโ€™ll break the world. Ethan had it all, until his best friend and the woman he loved betrayed him, leaving him crippled and forgotten. Three years of suffering later, he clawed his way to one final, desperate actโ€ฆ and the universe answered. A hidden quest. A second chance. A return to the moment everything began. Now, Ethan is back, on the eve of Etherealโ€™s launch, the worldโ€™s first fully immersive VR game and the battlefield where legends are forged. Last time, he played fair. This time? Heโ€™s armed with years of knowledge: every exploit, every secret quest, every broken mechanic that will let him climb straight to the top. But when he logs in, something is off. The system forces him into an unwanted classโ€”Druid, the gameโ€™s biggest joke. The kind of class people pick as a dare and regret immediately. Yet as Ethan digs deeper, the truth shakes him. [Congratulations! You have unlocked the Divine Bloodline: King of Elves!] Ethan stared at the screen, unblinking. โ€œโ€ฆThe hell?โ€ The Druid class was a jack-of-all-trades, master of noneโ€”a scattered mess of abilities that mimicked other classes but never truly excelled. Their bear form lacked the raw defense of a proper tank. Their panther form was weaker than a rogue. Their healing fell short of a priest, and their magic couldnโ€™t compare to a mageโ€™s devastating spells. Most players abandoned the class early, realizing they could never compete at the highest level. And yet, Ethanโ€™s stats are off the charts. His talents are absurd. His potential is beyond anything heโ€™s ever seen. The system has given him something no other Druid ever hadโ€”a divine bloodline, legendary abilities, and a growth rate that defies logic. If Druids were meant to be weak, then Ethan was the exception that would rewrite history. Heโ€™s not just here to reclaim his throne. Heโ€™s here to take everything. Factions will rise. Empires will fall. The strongest will thrive, and the weak will perish. And the ones who betrayed him? They wonโ€™t live to do it again.

Raundel_NFT ยท Fantasy
4.2
240 Chs

Young Master's PoV: Woke Up As A Villain In A Game One Day

"Now you see?" she shouted in a mix of annoyance and disappointment. "You can't outsmart Scrients! They're the most intelligent beings across the two realms." "You're right," I muttered, averting my gaze with a heavy sigh. "I made a mistake. I was too arrogant to think that a mere human like me could fool them." โ€”BOOM!! "Heik! Wh-What was that?" "Hmm? I'm not sure. Maybe you should go and ask the most intelligent beings across the two realms. Oh wait, you can't. I killed them all.โ€ ______ My name is Samael Kaizer Theosbane. On the last day of high school, I got into a fight with a kid I used to bully. It was a stupid, pointless scuffle, and in the middle of it, I tripped and hit my head on a rock. Thatโ€™s when the memories came flooding in - the memories of another life, of a different world. Suddenly, everything made a twisted kind of sense. I realized two things. First, I was in a game I used to play in my past life. Second, I was a villain. A villain! Not the cool and mysterious kind, either. No, my destiny was to be manipulated and die a dog's death! I was the worst type of clichรฉ: an ungrateful, privileged, insufferable young master. The sort you'd find in those poorly written fantasy stories. The kind everyone hates โ€” a snobby brat from a powerful noble family who thinks he owns the world just because he was born with a silver spoon lodged in his mouth. You know the type. The one the hero beats to a pulp to prove his worth. Yeah, I was that guy. And the hero? The hero was the kid Iโ€™d been bullying all this time. The same one I got into a fight with. He was the supposed savior of this damned world. A world teetering on the edge of destruction, beset by wars, calamities, and a grim future that only I knew. And at the end of it all, the final antagonist of the game, the undefeatable bossโ€ฆ the Spirit King, was waiting. But could I even make it to the end? Could I conquer a game where defeat was the only certainty? A game that was now my reality! โ€œAh, fuck it.โ€ I had no idea if I could, but I sure as hell was going to try. Extorting extras, manipulating main characters, twisting the story to my advantage, stealing the heroโ€™s cheat items, killing villains before they could become threats - nothing was beneath me. Would the main characters be affected? Who cares! Would the story change? Even better! All I cared about was meโ€”my survival, my life, my choices. โ€œI will live this life with no regrets.โ€ โ€ฆBut as I soon discovered, fate was not easily changed. And the price of altering one's destiny was steep. ========== Discord Server: https://discord.gg/VjFQtDUaTR

The_One_Who_Was ยท Fantasy
4.7
165 Chs

Reincarnated With Three Unique Skills

[ Congratulations on receiving the following Unique Skills: โ€“ Appraisal (Basic) โ€“ Skill Absorption (Mythic) โ€“ Universal Synthesis (Ultimate) ] _____________________________________ "Synthesis Skills: Swift Sword Strike + Fire Toad's Breath." [ Ding! ] [ Congratulations! Your Skill Synthesis was successful ] [ Your skills evolved into: Azula Sword Strike ] "Synthesis Materials: Titanium Runic Sword + Wyvern Bones" [ Congratulations! You Synthesis was successful. Your Sword has evolved into Skeletal Dragon Sword ] _________________________________ In a heart-wrenching tale of loneliness and despair, Ethan's life has been one of unending tragedy. Orphaned at a young age and tormented by a relentless terminal illness, he spent his final days confined to a cold, confined hospital room. As he takes his last breath, he awakened in a mysterious void, where Ethan is given the opportunity to choose three unique skills that will define his new existence. With millions of options but only three choices, he carefully selects his path, setting the stage for an extraordinary journey of Reincarnation. Reincarnated into a fantastical world filled with magical Skills, powerful beings, and untold dangers, Ethan must navigate his new life, wielding the skills he chose to survive and thrive in a realm where anything is possible. But the question remains: Will this second life bring him the happiness and purpose he was denied in his first, or will it lead him down an even darker path? Chapter release: 2 chs/day Guys, its my first time writing, and it might not suit everyone. I can only say sorry in advance. Thanks for reading!

Elias_Nightwalker ยท Fantasy
4.3
467 Chs

Primordial Villain with a Slave Harem

Quinlan, a simple office worker finds himself transmigrated to an extremely dangerous fantasy land as a level 1 Commoner with nothing to his name but his wits - and a unique gift that accompanied his teleportation. No one in Thalorind could have predicted that this unassuming arrival would one day rise to the top, redefining the very meaning of the term 'power'... And that he may have achieved said result by joining a criminal organization and clawing his way through its ranks. In the beginning, Quinlan was painfully weak and alone but thanks to his severe trust issues, joining a team was... hard. However, he soon noticed that a lot of people have collars around their necks in this world... People that couldn't exactly betray him. Follow Quinlan's journey as he grows in strength, amasses wealth, fights to the death, and meets lovely ladies. ... Discord: https://discord.gg/bjunEkswQ3 ... Disclaimer: I'd received a few complaints from some readers that my MC is not a real villain, and I have to agree; if you're looking for some complete psycho MC who burns random farmer villages down just for fun then don't read. The MC is a ruthless man who does evil things from time to time, but only to his enemies or those he considers to be true scum. He gains no joy from tormenting strangers. Also don't read if you want a story about buying s*x slaves and r*ping them, that doesn't happen in this novel. He will treat the women he wants to be with as if they were normal people, whether they're slaves or not.

NecroBin ยท Fantasy
4.5
690 Chs

I Can Copy And Evolve Talents

Across the vast convolution of worlds, divine beings rule as absolute sovereignsโ€”each god assigned dominion over a singular realm. Skirmishes are inevitable, whether for power, amusement, or sheer pettiness. One such battle, between Nexus, the God of Trickery, and an aging, senile deity, resulted in an anomalyโ€ฆ A soul misplaced. Elliot, an ordinary man, was never meant for Ulโ€™Tra-el. But fate, or perhaps a cosmic prank, had other plans. Unlike other worlds, Ulโ€™Tra-el is an aberrationโ€”one that developed a voice. A voice that diverged from the natural order. A voice that changed everything. Its foundation cracked, leaking dimensions into one another. Rifts tore open like festering wounds, vomiting forth unspeakable horrorsโ€”monsters not meant to exist. But the world did not sit idly by. In responseโ€”perhaps an act of self-preservationโ€”the world gifted its inhabitants power. Talents awakened, granting people extraordinary abilities. And for every rift sealed, the Voice of Ul rewarded them generously. Survival was simple: fight, grow stronger, and close the riftsโ€ฆ or die trying. In this ruthless, blood-soaked reality, Northernโ€”a white-haired boy burdened by his past lifeโ€”was reincarnated. But unlike the chosen heroes, he awakened as a talentless nobody. No power. No strength. No future. And when death loomed over himโ€”when despair clawed at his soul and the cold grip of the failure threatened to take himโ€” A Voice responded: [System Notice] [Your Soul cannot take a form.] [Searching for a Unique Pattern Abilityโ€ฆ] [Searchingโ€ฆ] [Search Found.] [A Unique System Ability has been detected.] [You Can Copy And Evolve Talents] ... Follow Northern through his journey as he becomes the pinnacle of this world. This a story about a white-haired boyโ€™s rise from rubbles!! Note: This is an overpower genre but MC does not just start off like that. Even though MC can copy talents he doesn't just jump around copying talents because there's a limitation. However, his rise to strength is depicted and is an experience to enjoy. The first few hundreds would be frustrating to follow because MC is weak but that makes the experience all the more interesting when MC finally gets freaking strong and starts wiping the floor with everyones asses.

RighteousFilth ยท Fantasy
3.7
874 Chs