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Potofhoney
PotofhoneyLv44yr
2020-07-10 01:41

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The Upgrade system

Dominion_Sage
4.3
86 Chs

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Dominion_Sage
Dominion_SageAuthor

Hello, Author here, This is my first time writing a novel so I hope you like it. I know that there are a lot of improvements that I can make so I would appreciate it if you could write down what I can do to improve the story and give suggestions for the story.

4yr

Phil_Bob
Phil_BobLv4

Great novel, has high potential and isn't as predictable as many others of it's genre are. A joy to read and is very entertaining. I would like to request the author to post more often, not twice everyday but maybe a extra chapter if the novel gets over 50 votes in a week. (Yes I just want more chapters. Fight me.)

4yr
Dominion_Sage
Dominion_SageAuthor

There has been a new discord server made for the novel. In there you can give me feedback and suggestions for the novel. You will also be able to help me choose which novel cover I should use and make suggestions for the cover. Discord link - https://discord.gg/h566zub I know that some people hate it when authors rate their books. I made this review just to share the discord. I will delete this comment after a week or so just so it doesn't get on the nerves of the people who hate it when authors rate their books more than once.

4yr
Writerx
WriterxLv1

I really enjoyed reading this novel. It had an amazing story line! But, please update it more than one chapter a day. I can’t get enough. Him becoming richer really made me happy since what he’s been through.

4yr
ForgottenTales
ForgottenTalesLv5

Ah friend Recommends this novel to me. And I got to say, it's really good. The story is easy to read, as well as to understand. The story progression I think is going swell. The grammar could be better but I think that gives it a charm to it, a beginner writer charm. If I was to rate it I would rate it 9/10. Posted at 29th chapter.

4yr
AsianLadyBoy
AsianLadyBoyLv12

Sucks that he has dropped this since he has not p[posted a single chapter in 8 months. I was really enjoying where everything was going, except for the really small chapter size. Towards the later chapters, it started to remind me of a novel that did not get picked for translations that was about someone being the Admin of a rich people chat group. He would invite rich people into the chat group and they would be able to buy amazing cultivation items for real-life cash. And the MC would be the benefactor of the money. But in this one, he invites a few people into a part of a system. It's really only the cash shop of the system. And that would allow them to buy items for real-life money. The world also started to change into a cultivation world and more random people were about to get a shop system. Basically, the world was becoming pay to win. And I was looking forward to more. Sadly I was disappointed in the end. This would be a 4.5-star novel if it was not dropped.

3yr
Dakotatoni
DakotatoniLv3

great story overall thought the detail is missing i have to fillllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll the 140 characters needed to post

4yr
Biplav_Subedi
Biplav_SubediLv4

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4yr
biplav_subedi
biplav_subediLv4

I want the upgrade system. 5 stars * 5 stars = 25 stars I want the upgrade system. 5 stars * 5 stars = 25 stars I want the upgrade system. 5 stars * 5 stars = 25 stars

4yr
ForgottenTales
ForgottenTalesLv5

Ah friend Recommends this novel to me. And I got to say, it's really good. The story is easy to read, as well as to understand. The story progression I think is going swell. The grammar could be better but I think that gives it a charm to it, a beginner writer charm. If I was to rate it I would rate it 9/10. Posted at 29th chapter.

4yr
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