Item: The Upgrade system
Rating: 5

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2020-07-28 19:03

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The Upgrade system

Dominion_Sage

4.3

86 Chs

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Hello, Author here, This is my first time writing a novel so I hope you like it. I know that there are a lot of improvements that I can make so I would appreciate it if you could write down what I can do to improve the story and give suggestions for the story.

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I want the upgrade system. 5 stars * 5 stars = 25 stars I want the upgrade system. 5 stars * 5 stars = 25 stars I want the upgrade system. 5 stars * 5 stars = 25 stars

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