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lunabeamLv104yr
2020-07-23 18:28

So far the story is interesting. In just 11 chapters, the world-building has been established. It's amazing how the writer was able to present the world she created in a way that the readers will understand easily. The female lead is very fun as well. Thankfully, she's thinking like an ***** she's supposed to be even though she's in the body of a child. I personally like how she uses her charm wisely. I'm curious to know who the ML is though~

Royal Secret: I'm a Princess!

sola_cola
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1011 Chs

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sola_cola
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Thank you for the review! :)

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tohru_chanowo
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yeah, me too, i agree with ya

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Looking forward to seeing the new chapters plz.. Give best reviews to the book.... Came here after reading the author's mommy villaness.......

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I have been trapped in the vicious cycle of looking to see if there's an update, to being disappointed that there is none and repeating after a couple minutes have passed. You've won, O great and powerful novel. A formidable foe you are, to be able to reduce me to such desperation for new updates. I know great potential when I see one. ' And no, person-who-is-reading-this, you will be disappointed if you're looking for a serious review as I have merely written this to express my woe in hopes author-sama will notice me. (I don't actually expect more updates because what we have is already amaze-balls, it's just that I can never satisfy hunger for new chapters and I just wanna vent on how awesome this book is, in an attempt to ignore the very concerning fascination I am having with this book.)

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