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SecondSea
SecondSeaLv144yr
2020-10-04 07:55

A book with lots of LOL !!! A very funny story about a 5 year old cussing princess and her dead beat dad. The writing quality in the first chapters feels like a new author who wasn't flesh out the story enough. It was hard to read because it felt like only the actions described with emotional aspects, but don't give up on this story because it get a lot better in the later chapters. I especilly like the writing interctions between her sh+tty dad and the princess because she directly tells her looser father what she thinks of him which is hilarious. I also love the fact that the characters in this book feel real and reasonable. I hate books where 90 percent of the characters are murdering psychopaths or low IQ prostitutes who do anything for money.

Royal Secret: I'm a Princess!

sola_cola
4.8
1011 Chs

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sola_cola
sola_colaAuthor

Thank you for the review! Hahaha I admit that I wasn't really into the story yet at the first part. I don't like it when female characters suck up to male characters. LOL. That's why after Neoma snapped at the emperor, I finally felt comfortable writing the story. I'm ashamed that my personal feelings affected the way I wrote the first part, but I learned from it. Thank you for giving my story a chance. <3

4yr
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Claudia_Guerrier
Claudia_GuerrierLv15

thanks author for the great story and thank you can you please give a crazy update[img=recommend]

3yr
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Leona_Desrosiers
Leona_DesrosiersLv4

Good job

3yr
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lily_crescent
lily_crescentLv4

how many chapters will there be??

3yr
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Tiny_Miny_8660
Tiny_Miny_8660Lv1

Yah you are right

3yr
Tiny_Miny_8660
Tiny_Miny_8660Lv1

Yah

sola_cola:Thank you for the review! Hahaha I admit that I wasn't really into the story yet at the first part. I don't like it when female characters suck up to male characters. LOL. That's why after Neoma snapped at the emperor, I finally felt comfortable writing the story. I'm ashamed that my personal feelings affected the way I wrote the first part, but I learned from it. Thank you for giving my story a chance. <3
3yr
Hansa1329
Hansa1329Lv14

Your writing style has improved and I’m totally in love with it. Please make sure to complete the story. I was very sad when there was no updates on Mommy Villainess. So I really hope you finish this (and then MV too😉) yes, I’m greedy for your stories.

sola_cola:Thank you for the review! Hahaha I admit that I wasn't really into the story yet at the first part. I don't like it when female characters suck up to male characters. LOL. That's why after Neoma snapped at the emperor, I finally felt comfortable writing the story. I'm ashamed that my personal feelings affected the way I wrote the first part, but I learned from it. Thank you for giving my story a chance. <3
2yr
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Anjalol
AnjalolLv2

the plot and the story so far are great!! the fl is really funny and strong love the way she thinks 😁 I'm curious about the ml who is he? ( I'm sorry I'm and writing reviews thanks for all the chapters author I really love this story )

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MXNSOON
MXNSOONLv1

oml the first ever book to make me laugh so much like, the FL humour is so my cup of tea. lol I absolutely love the fact that she curses, her cursing at her father gives me ✨life✨ The FL knows what's greed unlike most of other fl mc's which I love (or is it just me?). the writing is easy to understand, I can picture the world and characters fine. and,,,and idk who's the official ml yet but Lewis is babey. nero possessive but he's babey too 🙈♥️ okay lol,,,(ipromisethisistheend) I've said it once and I'll say it again, I absolutely ADORE the FL. I said what I said, and I won't be taking any criticism 🥰😌

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ipohtown
ipohtownLv4

So far I like the story.. the little FL is so cute and adorable and smart too. The little ML is possessive and protective.. I like the good start of the story. Keep up the good work author!!. 😍😍😍

4yr
tia_04
tia_04Lv2

Looking forward to seeing the new chapters plz.. Give best reviews to the book.... Came here after reading the author's mommy villaness.......

4yr
MoustachePerson
MoustachePersonLv3

I have been trapped in the vicious cycle of looking to see if there's an update, to being disappointed that there is none and repeating after a couple minutes have passed. You've won, O great and powerful novel. A formidable foe you are, to be able to reduce me to such desperation for new updates. I know great potential when I see one. ' And no, person-who-is-reading-this, you will be disappointed if you're looking for a serious review as I have merely written this to express my woe in hopes author-sama will notice me. (I don't actually expect more updates because what we have is already amaze-balls, it's just that I can never satisfy hunger for new chapters and I just wanna vent on how awesome this book is, in an attempt to ignore the very concerning fascination I am having with this book.)

4yr
SakuraZStorm
SakuraZStormLv10

I need more.... DAMMIT WHY ISNT THERE MOREEEEEEEEEE ITS TOO GOOD I WANT IT ALL PLEASE MORE CHAPTERS PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

4yr
lunabeam
lunabeamLv10

So far the story is interesting. In just 11 chapters, the world-building has been established. It's amazing how the writer was able to present the world she created in a way that the readers will understand easily. The female lead is very fun as well. Thankfully, she's thinking like an ***** she's supposed to be even though she's in the body of a child. I personally like how she uses her charm wisely. I'm curious to know who the ML is though~

4yr
mhiabie
mhiabieLv11

i like the start of the story and it looks interesting. im looking forward to see how the characters will develop in the long run and im excited to see how can she avoid her death flags hahaahahh

4yr
Vallulice_C
Vallulice_CLv1

The story is really interesting, i love the plot !! Neoma is so cool and Nero so evil 😆 however I don’t like their father he’s such an a$$!!!! Unfortunately i can’t fully enjoy the story because of the author’s wobbly english at times... But it won’t stop me from reading this Novel 😊 Despite it’s flaws it’s a very promising story, You should definitely check it out !

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