Item: Royal Secret: I'm a Princess!
Rating: 3.6
Author: Vallulice_C

Vallulice_CLv14yr

2020-08-21 05:49

The story is really interesting, i love the plot !! Neoma is so cool and Nero so evil 😆 however I don’t like their father he’s such an a$$!!!! Unfortunately i can’t fully enjoy the story because of the author’s wobbly english at times... But it won’t stop me from reading this Novel 😊 Despite it’s flaws it’s a very promising story, You should definitely check it out !

Royal Secret: I'm a Princess!

sola_cola

4.8

1011 Chs

Liked by 9 people

Replies4

sola_colaAuthor

Thank you for the review! Sorry for my wobbly English, it's not my first language. But I'm working hard to improve and deliver a better free story for you. 🥰😅

4yr

Vallulice_CLv1

I hope you didn’t take it the wrong way, I really like your story and i find it really promising. I genuinely enjoy your characters and i was so immersed in your story that I didn’t realize how fast I read it 😅 I hope that you’ll be able to improve it over time

4yr

Vallulice_CLv1

Thank you so much for sharing it with us !!!

4yr

dakencia_sejourLv3

your English is perfectly fine and I love your stories

sola_cola:Thank you for the review! Sorry for my wobbly English, it's not my first language. But I'm working hard to improve and deliver a better free story for you. 🥰😅

4yr

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I need more.... DAMMIT WHY ISNT THERE MOREEEEEEEEEE ITS TOO GOOD I WANT IT ALL PLEASE MORE CHAPTERS PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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