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2020-06-05 07:54

Alright. If you are looking for something proper that makes sense. Then this isn’t for you. If you just want randomness that will be funny then sure. And before some idiot comes and say how I am being a troll. I will list it out. 1. The author tries way too hard to make the MC seem so good at this game. His struggle is so much so it makes him so great. Smh. Meanwhile no game like this would sell with such crappy features. Unless this is the alpha and major ass updates are needed. 2. Super big plot contexts that contradict. And a game that is so super advanced and supposed to apparently be a lighyear ahead pioneer shouldn’t have such. Smh. 3. The forcefulness of the pushing realistic VR to combine game elements and reality to the point that it doesn’t make sense. It’s like the author wants a reincarnation VR story but doesn’t do it as good as legendary mechanic or others. 4. I have seen reincarnation system stories with more believable and sensible system management. 5. It honestly feels like the author has never played any proper games or read and learnt from VR game stories. It has so much wasted potential. But that is just my point of view. I’m a serious gamer so I am fickle about the gaming aspect.

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ur_stupidity
ur_stupidityLv6

Yeahhhhhhh. But in the ****tiest and most obvious way ever with plot holes that a planet could fall in. I have seen many novels do it better. Hell. Even Hardcore Leveling Warrior does it better and that is near the bottom of the pile.

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XxSurViValXx
XxSurViValXxLv1

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TheArcher7
TheArcher7Lv12

The author probably wanted to have a mix of worlds. Bit since he never does anything with Earth (except for 3 chapters every 100 chapters), it is a waste.

OriginLord
OriginLordLv15

I'm a bit late, but if you read all the chapter you would realize that it's indeed a real world.

Dakratas
DakratasLv13

Can you elaborate on that pls? I'm thinking of reading it but I don't like virtual worlds with no impact on real life regarding strength gain.

OriginLord:I'm a bit late, but if you read all the chapter you would realize that it's indeed a real world.
OriginLord
OriginLordLv15

So Spoiler Alert: Actually later in the story he discover that the magic spells in the games can be used in real life and by that I mean he can learn them but the problem with the real world is that he lacks the magic power to use it, it was inted earlier on when the effect of a spell in the game carried over to real life and the strange company behind it.

Dakratas:Can you elaborate on that pls? I'm thinking of reading it but I don't like virtual worlds with no impact on real life regarding strength gain.
OriginLord
OriginLordLv15

Something like the energy needed for it is lacking in the environnement

OriginLord:So Spoiler Alert: Actually later in the story he discover that the magic spells in the games can be used in real life and by that I mean he can learn them but the problem with the real world is that he lacks the magic power to use it, it was inted earlier on when the effect of a spell in the game carried over to real life and the strange company behind it.
KneeCapBandit
KneeCapBanditLv14

It was the lack of elements in the air. (A thought i had in the shower) what if the reason tHat people cant use magic is because someone is sealing the elements from coming to our plane For some reason. but that reason is becauss A big baddie who terrorized the world is sealed and tHe seal uses all the elements in the world to function but now that the elements are coming back this mysterious company got the help of the gods to raise heros to combat this big baddie. or something like that. shower thoughts amirite

OriginLord:Something like the energy needed for it is lacking in the environnement
KING_LEWIS_II
KING_LEWIS_IILv15

no, it's still a virtual world, but it's a copy of a different world that's real. and that's stupid

OriginLord:I'm a bit late, but if you read all the chapter you would realize that it's indeed a real world.
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