Item: [QT] SAVE THE VILLAINESS : SYSTEM IN PROGRESS
Rating: 4.6

ThePotatoKingLv144yr

2020-05-05 03:48

Amazing story and good writing Author. Though its turning out to be a yuri genre its still pretty good. I don't really read yaoi/yuri so i don't know how this compares with others. But it is a fairly good story itself.

[QT] SAVE THE VILLAINESS : SYSTEM IN PROGRESS

Carciphones_02

4.5

57 Chs

Liked by 1 people

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Carciphones_02Author

Thank you for your review!!!! It's fine.. i won't forced you to read it!! (. ❛ ᴗ ❛.)

4yr

ThePotatoKingLv14

Lol Nah it's fine. Strong female leads always work. Also the story is pretty good so that doesn't really affect me.

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4yr

Carciphones_02Author

You don't have to worry about the yuri part because it's not the main focus of this story. I only wanted to save the poor villainess. While my novel certainly has yuri inside, it's more to the feeling and I don't write smut anyway.

ThePotatoKing:Lol Nah it's fine. Strong female leads always work. Also the story is pretty good so that doesn't really affect me.

4yr

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Carciphones_02Author

If I'm rating on my stories, I will give my:- writing quality- 3 star stability of updates- 2 star Story Development- 4 star Character Design - 4 star World Background- 4 star I used Grammarly on my writing, but only the basic ones, so there might be a lot of other mistakes that I didn't know. The stability of updates for my novels suck. That's because I get distracted easily. And also, sometimes I forgot what is the right word to use for a certain activity that results in me watching anime and reading other's novel. I think the story development is pretty good. I have already thought of many scenes and actions and the direction of where this novel will go. But the only thing that dragging me down right now is the stability of updates. For Character design, I think it will be fine If you could give me time to explore and give all of them certain traits that will result in the way they all act. Meaning, they all have reasons for their personality and views on the world. lastly, for the world background, I think only me that can see it now. Because you are supposed to understand the world-building by reading my other novel. But yeah... the updates suck too. That's all. You should rate my novel too so I get to I know which part In the novel that I can fix. This way, I can improve my writing skill and your reading experience at the same time.

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BaeVidaLv14

Alright, the move is nice. Your normal system novel and subsided missions. The twist in it is that the MC has to protect and help the villainess while still being close friends of the female lead. Well the villainess herself ain't bad, just a victim of family standards. Then the stupid annoying ball system, that likes to give our MC a headache. My only problem with this book is the grammatical errors. Not much but it should be checked, almost all writers have that. And the update stability, stop being lazy with anime author and write. U would give ur readers an update starvation. Not nice. Anyway nice work, keep it up. Ohh FYI, I think there is future Yuri.

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