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Uncle_Sheogorath
Uncle_SheogorathLv44yr
2020-01-21 04:32

Good story so far but don't soften the mc. After all, he was a former assassin so he shouldn't react extremely to disturbing things for example how he reacted to Itachi going to war. I hate it when mc somehow have tragic backgrounds but react not realistically. Also if you have him attached towards his family/clan. Please don't make him worship Itachi like some god. Even though Itachi is a badass, he is still a traitor to his family and clan I mean what normal person would betray their family to the government?

A Naruto Fan-Fic

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25 Chs

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Lysonic
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a brainwashed one. "will of fire"

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Dragonia_101
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Really good story but just dont soften the mc. He is an Assassin . From 1st chapter maybe the strongest one so if someone like one softens too much it would be bad. Otherwise the story is great. I do think that u should put some logical problems in his breakthrough to higher ranks in chakra and gates in higher realms. I recommend reading this novel

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Farmy
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if you are like me who hate rebirth into uchiha clan , well dont bother with this one its another uchiha rebirth, MC name ken itachi younger brother---------------------------------------

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Gamer2800
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Reveal spoiler

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asaade9999
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dropped because of the stupidity of the story, a 3 years old naruto got enter to the ninja academy for the sake of the plot, and this is just another story where the mc babysitting naruto. dropped because of the stupidity of the story, a 3 years old naruto got enter to the ninja academy for the sake of the plot, and this is just another story where the mc babysitting naruto.

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Hide_on_Webnovel
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Rookie author here! I only do this for fun so the stability of updates is random. Anyway, thanks for reading. Leave comments and reviews.

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