Sadly you went the harem route, it's clear it going to affect the story as the entire power and system seems to be based on the harem, which i don't like. I've read both novels myself but i've noticed the story seems to rely on the reader having lots of foreknowledge about those novel and while it's acceptable as a fanfic, a great fanfic would be written in a way where this isn't necessary needed. Also whats with the mass fake 5 star review by bot accounts? Why is this acceptable? As the author can't you delete them? But yeah i liked the idea but the harem thing just ruined it for me, though't i'd read an original novel but it'll quickly develop into some smutty rubbish and make the plot suck.

DROP HAREM PLS !!!!!!!!!!!! DROP HAREM PLS !!!!!!!!!!!! DROP HAREM PLS !!!!!!!!!!!! DROP HAREM PLS !!!!!!!!!!!! DROP HAREM PLS !!!!!!!!!!!! DROP HAREM PLS !!!!!!!!!!!! DROP HAREM PLS !!!!!!!!!!!! DROP HAREM PLS !!!!!!!!!!!! DROP HAREM PLS !!!!!!!!!!!! DROP HAREM PLS !!!!!!!!!!!!

Love the harem, love the system, love the grammar, love the variety of vocabulary, love the story, and love the original anime. Ignore those readers who hates harem. It's an anime with beautiful girls everywhere and they expected no harem? What the hell man. P.S. : Please don't drop this novel, it's one of the few good harem novels which is grammaticaly readable

I really tried to give a chance to this story, but it's unreadable grammar is good but everything else well it's ****. Mc is ***** and too childish in my opinion, his system give only one type of mission get a girl in his harem.. And his personality is to unrealistic, because I can't even imagine how someone would act like that. And he spills his secrets like water, to anyone who ask, just why? Better open a shop with name 'My secrets' today only for 0,99$ at least he would get some profit. Would not recommend read it.

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Duh, I did not even care about it having harem, because at least it introduced it in the beginning! I'm reviewing this in 3 stars, for a reason. MC have to pick it up and say it's from another world, really? Who in good conscience, tell another person his secret that should be kept with 7 keys? As long as it's not those harems where ... all the girls fall in love, simply because they saved them ... I believe you will do well!

Glad to have found this original story as I am quite a fan of both series. I was rather worried because of the harem element and have experienced many good stories go bad because the authors were either rushing the harem or including far too many with nonsense reasons. Then I read your own review and am very glad to see that you seem to know what kind of mistakes not to make(mistakes in my opinion). I will definitely continue reading this story with great interest and hope for a long and pleasant read. All in all, a very nice story although it's more for people who are familiar with both series. I wish you good luck!

Another book dropped because of a sissy MC. This is the problem with fanfiction. This is a chinese novel based app, which means MC are strong, traditionalists. If I wanted to see dudes getting wrecked by the women in their lofe I would go to Japanese novel app. Get your crap right.

I am a huge of Mahouka Koukou and very happy when I found this fanfic here, seeing as this stuff is very rare even on Fanfiction site. At first, it was good and entertaining, but out of nowhere the plot become a rollercoaster and everything doesn't make sense, it's too fast and out of nowhere everyone is out for mc's sperm, including the big bad boss Maya (Tatsuya Aunt) I was like FTW?! and it's just like not long after he transported into mahouka world. Where'a the plot? story? I am so disappointed... I hope the author doesn't mix his novel with his wet dream.