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Why is it that if not vampires, always mortal against gods is what I am reading? Well, the story is good. It's fast-paced indeed. But smooth read and interesting. How would that boy win against the gods? He may be one of those failures too! I recommend this book. Looking forward to Lius meeting with his family
The action should be understand like thisA ferocious strike is approaching me very fast, an attack directed to my head, or neck, tsk......i did not even give time to turn my head to look at the attacker Has that been little clearer?If not, i would like to see yours😊Note: i am practicing to wrote Descriptions for action scenes as short as possible for the readers to get completely hooked to the scene. While reading action scenes from books, explanation of actions is really breaking the fun, at least for me. I am a reader that is little by little becoming an author after all😅
I would like to know how you understand that😅The action really is strange and is a little hard to explain.If you can do a rewrite for that, i would like to give it a read.Well, if you understand the action being describe despite the weirdness of the description, i guess it's fine.I lack word materials after all
Uhm, yeah, but walking is a process of moving from one place to another through raising up your legs or such.It's not like mastering the way you step your foot; to master climbing up walls, water, or air.Walking simply means walking.😑Thus, another mastery is born,The STEPPERS!!!😎But seriously where do you people get your gif's. 🐴🤔
I wonder what i could get mastering the walkerIs there still a wandering person at their town that hasn't mastered walking? 🤣🤣I wonder how a mastered walking looks like
Lab rat... Ugh... Well, it's already dead though
Whoah, the story writing is kind of original, man... Hey author, are you a director or something? Haha the scenes are professionally done.The read is too smooth which is what i really like.To be honest chapter one is not that smooth, but, anywayEverything is good, too bad i am not into zombies😅I wonder what your fantasy genre novels will looks likeActually i want this 4 star because i hate zombiesBut i should not be bias here🤣🤣🤣
Tsk. Your only trying to get corpse for your necromancer 🙄
Flying can also be called running tho😅Every act to survive, may it be with vehicle, swimming, and etc.As far as i know, kt is running for lifeBut if this is pretty hard for the readers, the author will do changes💪
No, at the next chapter, reader could understand that the MC still suffers the nightmare because when he woke up, he wipes out substances that is from his dried up tears😁I am trying to cover every plot hole you know🕳️🤣😎