Bird of Hermes [Familiar of Zero]

劇透

To think someone had the balls to associated Alucard with an actual honest to god simp. If you, the reader, have been lured by the "I'm bird of Hermes.." stuff, then I suggest looking elsewhere.

Hahaha Louise summoned or rather created an Incubus it seems to be her familiar. Lets see how things goes but i quite expect a lot of adult chapters! MC seems to looks like this

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Pretty good so far and interesting enough to keep reading. An Mc that walks in his coolly own stride and takes things easy without added drama so far. - He seems to be based somewhat on Hellsing Alucard, and he serves his master dutifully like Hellsing Alucard, but if you're a reader that can't stand that, then I guess this might be a no go for you. - He might be a little pervy, but it doesn't cross into the harassment or annoying simp territory since the ladies are all aboard to showing him some love back as well. - Don't worry about the reviews talking about simping as that isn't even what the definition of the word simp means.

Wow... A Zero No Tsukaima with an OP original protagonist who is a demon? And quite handsome and ripped it seems lol. Louise stood no chance against his natural charms ahahahhahah. Soon the master it will be hard to tell who is the master here. I quite look forward to MC as the author said. Break Louise's bed and cause her to scream his name. SO Author, pls write very good and very long AND very juicy Rl8 chapters.

Well.... The grammar and world background are Excellent, there are only very few chapters so far but it's quite good but not much can be said about character design and story development with so few chapters but we will see. The MC seems to be an original demon?, extremely handosome, full of muscle, very tall, with long black hair, red eyes and red horns, without past who seemly was created the moment Luise summoned him as a familiar. It seems to be VERY strong. So for him, Luise is his creator, thus, everything for him. MC also very very lustful, So him being an Incubus may fit. I quite liked it so far.

The author seems to like Alucard from Hellsing, so he took some references from there and created the MC who seems to be some kind of Lustful Demon who treats Luise as His creator and master. From what we got so far, MC did not exist prior to Louise's summoning. So he had no past or a name. So Louise gave him one. He seems to have quite a lot of knowledge in different aspects and will do whatever Louise wants but he is also wouldn't mind a hârêm of girls. I also can't help but think that Saito is way too pitiful and that if he was handsome, full of muscle, and tall, he wouldn't have been treated badly by Louise lol

interesting, and if you want to read do it, but of course without being like many who criticize that this is not what they think, just enjoy the story that is free xD (there are others of the same that start worse).

it's interesting

in my opinion it's good I'll say he does play the familiar role well iwoudnt call him a simp thought u can tell he's lustful and Remember this just my opinion

Finally a zero no tsukaima ff. MC is handsome, OP and alucard look alike in terms of powers. MC personality is also cool ruthless to enemies but charming to ladies. This is a nice loli loving ff. Louise the loli needs more love and care. Thanks for this ff author and please don't drop and more chapters please. I need more zero no tsukaima ff any recommendations anyone?

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10/10 a great read so far I'm looking forward to the rest of the story. the oc character is great and a lot better than the anime/Manga Mc. the chapter release seems to be steady but that is yet to be seen in the long run. Grammer mistakes are few and far between if not there at all. over all great, keep it up author!

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the introduction of the first chapter was great, fantastic, a very intelligent way of describing reality. the first chapters follow the canon in an original way, very good. the MC is an alpha male.

Should you judge the book by it's tittle? the asnwer is; kinda? The MC's a likable character that shows us a different aproach of the usual ff of "familiar of zero" Very entertaining, a lot of potential, likable MC and not a childish kind of ff. In my opinion, a really good ff

This is my subjective review of this fan fiction. Writing Quality - 5/5: The grammar and how the author narrates things is great, no conspicuous flaws here. Story Development - 3/5: It's slow. The story development is being held back because of the constant filler chapters the author does. Character Design - 4/5: Even though the MC is a slave, it's understandable. Louise is pretty much his creator so his actions are acceptable. Updating Stability - 3/5: A chapter every day? That's dope! BUT again, because the majority of the chapters are fillers, I won't rate it 5 stars. I think I'd rather have 3k words a chapter every 2 days rather than 1500 words every day for it to be a worthless filler. World Background - 4/5: Nothing's changed.

i like it so far. except for the weird speech pattern when he fought Guiche and the lack of sublety when he wanted to bed Louise (the inner monologue about him ravishing her but waiting for it was not really needed, we got the message already earlier with how smitten he was about her) its good and i hope for more