Ashish_Kumar_1835

The repetitive sub plots as well too many side characters popping up regularly makes the story cumbersome

mashing 2 universes and still not able to properly utilise elements of them both.

This feels more like a summary in the guise of a fic.

The hapzard way of writing the story is the downfall of this fic.

An intriguing story. The genre troupe is followed by the latter. Still have to leave after a long journey as the plot has become repetitive.

Nothing unique in terms of story. the premise at first looked promising but after some time the story started following an overpowered mc plot.

At one time this story was good but now it has lost its pacing as well it's plot. Now it's just looks likes a amalgamation of different plotlines.

The story started out good but the speed at which it petered out is all too common.

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2 Follow the plotline closely, if you decide to do this then you will start incorporating irregularities in the story which will lead to plot holes ultimately ending the story midway .