Time_Zekrom_4361

Author you good?

Good story so far!! I want to ask if you could somehow give more personality to the main character since the story so far is just a sequence of events, which is fine since the story barely started. Good luck!!

I dont like how you try to make Xiao Yan have almost the same as the mc just because of dragon bloodline. Like how strong is a dragon and why is Xiao Yan so weak.

I shall predict the future, he shall make Xiao Chen look like he cheated!!!

Great story telling, background, and transition!!! Keep it up!!

Thanks for the chapter!!

This novel is great so far but I feel sad for you now after web novel banned everyone from reading on PC which makes it even harder for people to find ur story. I will try to read this novel in my free time on myiPhone. Goodluck!!

thank you for the chapter!!! Hope this gives u some motivation!!!

thanks for the chapter!!! when is the mc going to steal the "special items encounters"