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John_W_22252 years ago發表Raw? __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
該書已被刪除。- John_W_22252 years ago回復 Sipho_Hlatshwayo
raw?
該書已被刪除。 - John_W_22252 years ago發表
No Chapter today?
- John_W_22252 years ago發表
I love the idea of Nonhuman Mc plz keep on writing it -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
- John_W_22252 years ago回復 BABY_YODA
I havn't really
- John_W_22252 years ago發表
I like OP, writing quality is good but I would have like more details ( in regards to the World and MC's decisions, motivations, ambitions ) and a more serious MC and more immersive writing (less 4th wall-breaking jokes). But that's just my preference it is a Fanfic after all.
- John_W_22252 years ago發表
It's a rare find I like it all except the fact that he took Azula with him, so it's not for me. ------------------------------------------------------------------
- John_W_22252 years ago發表
????
- John_W_22252 years ago發表
Seemed very promising at first but an Mc with creator powers running around like a wimpy teen ruined it very quickly. Unbearable! ---------------------------------------------------