Marvel:Cybertron

There's Chinese novel like your novel. I hope your novel doesn't go like the Chinese one. 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

The initial 5 chapters are good but, then it kinda falls down a cliff, hitting every rock on the way down, when it comes to dialogue in chapter 7-8. That's where I dropped this.

At first the story started of good even though it was fast pace but after chapter 6 the story started to go down hill. The idea of the story was good but the the execution was bad in my 'OPINION'.

Good grammer, stable update and okaish character design. But 4 questions. Why does the all spak energy keep depleting if its basically infinite in power. That doesn't make sense to me. why does the system have power over his dimention and yet he doesn't. And lastly for someone who has soposed knowledge of all the multiverse he's not used it once.

Now, this novel is unique and interesting... hopefully it will continue till the end as it has plenty of potential..............................

劇透

Just hoping you won't drop the novel, anyway about the fanfic, the story is original, interesting a bit faced pace but it's Ok, grammar is good, so yup 4.6 stars from me.

A Marvel Transformer Crossover that shows a potential to be a great read. It just need more World Building and Character Developement. The story so far is great!!!!!

Kenneth_Handsbury: wonderful read, one if the very best that I have come across. great story, great character.Kenneth_Handsbury: wonderful read, one if the very best that I have come across. great story, great character.Kenneth_Handsbury: wonderful read, one if the very best that I have come across. great story, great character.

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I already half read the one that mentions the other Marvel comment: Start Check-in, Megatron and I only hope that the protagonist is not so dark or evil, but so far I love the idea of this novel.......... .... dfsfsfsf dfsfsfsf dfsfsfsf dfsfsfsf dfsfsfsf dfsfsfsf dfsfsfsf dfsfsfsf dfsfsfsf dfsfsfsf dfsfsfsf dfsfsfsf dfsfsfsf dfsfsfsf dfsfsfsf dfsfsfsf dfsfsfsf dfsfsfsf dfsfsfsf dfsfsfsf dfsfsfsf dfsfsfsf dfsfsfsf dfsfsfsf dfsfsfsf dfsfsfsf dfsfsfsf dfsfsfsf dfsfsfsf dfsfsfsf dfsfsfsf dfsfsfsf

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This novel is good and it's my first transformer fanfic. Also please don't make the mc a hero instead make him neutral. 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

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The story's incredible but I wish the author returned and continued it

......... did author dropped this novel?

deadend wass .................................................................................................................................................

beta mc ......beta mc .............beta mc ..........beta beta mc .............beta mc .... .............beta mc .............beta mc ....beta mc .............beta mc ....

Writing Quality ★★☆☆☆; Stability of Updates ★★★☆☆; Story Development ★★☆☆☆; Character Design ★☆☆☆☆; World Background ★☆☆☆☆. The only interesting thing is the idea of an MC who can create an army of autobots in the MCU and who has a dimension of his own. I have nothing to salvage other than what is mentioned. Read it at your discretion. (google traductor)