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True King of the Pirates

Orion Kartia's life was cut short and he was now forced to transmigrate into the wonderful world of One Piece but thankfully he has a few gifts to help him get started! This is purely fan-fiction. It's just a way for me to practice my English whilst writing something enjoyable. This book is targeted at avid One Piece fans as there is a lot of terminology that can only be understood by people who follow the manga/anime. The release schedule for normal working weeks will be as follows: Mon - 1x Chapters Tues - 1x Chapter Wed - 1x Chapters Thurs - 1x Chapter Fri - 1x Chapters Sat - 2x Chapters Sun - 2x Chapters Any mass releases or dead periods will be announced in advance. Thank you for all the support so far but please don't hold back with the criticism as well... I need it to improve my writing. I welcome all criticism, as long as it's constructive! I'm mainly using this to test the waters and improve my writing, as I'm also working on the story I'm most proud of and looking forward to releasing! I won't be releasing that one for the foreseeable future as I want to have written the majority of the story in advance as the goal is to get paid on the back of it. And there are too many potentially good novels that finish half way through for one reason or another. I don't want my main novel to be one of those!

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So the winner of the raffle is DarkMaster0386:

Name: Saint Caroline

Age: 18

Weapon: Rapier

Devil fruit: none

God's gift: Pure Yin Qi Manual

Weapon comprehension: Swordsman or whatever rapier is

Personality: Elegant like a noble but not super arrogant

There were 3 that really caught my eye, but this was the one I thought fit into the future of the story best. You'll see why in the not so distant future.

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On a side note. I know a lot of you are upset about the Roman disappearance and I'm not going to say much other than:

1. It won't be forever.

2. It's important for both Roman's and Ori's future.

3. DO NOT try to threaten me with your views/stones to get me to change the story! As much as I appreciate all my viewers and the stones you give, please remember this story is for free and I'm not going to beg for your views.

This is a practice book where I get to experiment with different ideas and concepts, this is just one of them. If after the return of Roman you still don't agree with that idea then please explain why without throwing your toys out the pram for a story you're not writing!

Not all of your comments went unnoticed. LonelyGodKing, your idea about having me having you as the readers find out about Roman's disappearance alongside Ori was actually a good one and I am upset I didn't think of that when I was writing it. For others if you have any feedback that's constructive (positive or negative) please say so in an adult like manner.

To sum up I will not be going back and "Fixing it", nor will I change my plan so Ori goes and gets Roman back in the next 3 chapters. If you wish to stop reading as a result it's a shame, but I understand.

I have been really sick since getting back from holiday so I will be taking a little break, I will more than likely be back next week.

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