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The X-Gene of Fate

作者: BoredAsura
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A young mutant in the Marvel 6161 universe tries to master their powers in a world that hates them for being who they are. They will go through trials and tribulations from humans, demon, mutants, inhumane, and anything else that gets thrown at them. Will our young mutant join one of the many mutant groups, turn his back on mutants and join another team of heroes who might never truly understand him, or will he forge his path in the chaotic universe? Read to find out! We are back! Ready to update, take names, kick butts, and pass out swiss cake rolls. Please support me on Kofi: https://ko-fi.com/boredasura --Warnings: Just cause I want no one to be shocked and complain later-- -If you are looking for a book full of cougars going after a kid, this is the wrong story. -If you are looking for something sweet-ish like a superhero cartoon, wrong story. -Looking for me to follow everything in Marvel and not create my ideas, wrong story. -Looking for someone who will not kill a woman opponent, wrong story. -Looking for a system that talks back, wrong story -If you wish for the same events as in comics, the wrong story - Looking for me to follow the timeline exactly, I don't even know how to properly read a marvel timeline except for the big stuff. -Looking for a harem, eh this might happen but only 3 or 4 at most but it will not be every random woman falling for him.

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I started reading this novel a while ago, i really like of DC and Marvel universes, so i liked of the novel very quickly, it wasn't the best fanfic I had ever read, but i liked it a lot and in my opinion the novel had great potential, the protagonist was intelligent, he had talent, he had courage and his personality was changing over time, some things for better others not so much, but it is something rare in fanfics, the main character was evolving as a person, it was very interesting to see how much he changed while living with the servants. However, the author was not feeling comfortable with the progress of the story and decided to "rewrite" it, i honestly didn't care much, i found his attitude of trying to improve and further develop his work very admirable, but honestly ... I don't see evolution, writingquality still good, but the idea is poorly executed, the main character is ... weak, i'm not talking about strength, i mean personality, the old character was a child, but i never felt that he was "weak" , what i mean is that the personality of this "new" character is pathetic, it's like he doesn't exist, he's a blank board: He's not smart, he's not talented, he's not strong, he's not funny, he's not brave(he is a coward), he is simply not pleasant to read, he has no quality as a protagonist. I didn't understand his relationship with Liz in the first chapter, that was meaningless ... In the other version you wrote 60 chapters and there was nothing romantic or sexual, there were some clues, but nothing that big, everything was smoother, apparently the approach of the "harem" tag will be more aggressive too ... I know it's too early to do a review, but honestly, i've read too many novels and i know how it will end, i don't want to offend you, i really liked your first work and i gave ** whenever i could, but ... This continuation made me very sad .

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