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The World of Pokemon 2.0

作者: RebornJayR
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This is dropped! Started new series The World Of Pokémon 3.0

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Aeternabilis
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Okay so there are a couple of things, first is lizz honestly I hate her. Its just how you brought her in exactly like misty and then had her stalk him etc. I found it extremely annoying. Going from that it seems this is gonna happen a lot.. I mean yes they guy may be handsome but girls will look maybe go up to him but they wont be crazy af, stalk him, grab onto him and drag him around etc. All I can say/ask will this happen throughout ? Cause if it does honestly might just drop it cause it makes it so hard to read. I mean Its fine if you say did it once and then did it again in a different way 50 chaps later if that is a style you like. However its just with every girl he meets its the same crazy stalker sht.. There are a couple of things I do like however, is mainly he is going on the journey alone. I mean its fine having friends in the cities etc meeting at centres now and again or other such places. But when traveling through forests, searching around, discovering new places. I feel him doing this alone is much better not to just read but for the story. I mean he can always have one person travel with him now and again but him alone will allow him to surprise ppl, connect with his pokemon and train/develop them in peace. If with others this wont go aswell. Another thing that I like is that they all have something that makes them unique (but pika) great for the story and makes a way for us to connect with them. Can only hope you dont get too many pokemon, hopefully only 6.. I mean for a reader its so hard keeping up with like 50 different pokemon. One thing I feel you MUST do is evolve pika.. will makes no sense if he doesnt as his whole thing is going by the game system. However with the evolution you can make it special and just find an image of pika is altered and use that. Another idea is him maybe making his own company, make it a social media company like instagram or something. (do this once he has won the league) and then he can post to others images of places he sees in his travels, his pokemon etc. Going back to what I hope you dont go to deep into is the family, two souls, light dark thing. It is rly overused and just came to read a light fic about pokemon. I mean thats what pokemon is.. its just annoying to read for me anyway. Plus seen it wayyyy to many tines. Finally you HAVE to sort out this move thing... its honestly taking the piss. Literally in all his important fights he magically 'temporally' learns a move to let him win the fight. You want him to win by power, strategy etc not by 'luckily' learning the move he needs to win for 60 secs.

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