The Vision

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If the author is to lazy to write a proper synopsis I am to lazy to read the fic. I don't say that to be mean, but come on, I just want to know the basic before I put my time into reading this.

5 ⭐ for the idea. . 1 star for the massive word count that lets you post the book with only 3 chapters...

Quack quack. Just wanted to drop the first review for my fic and nothing else. Feel free to ask me questions.

If beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder, what then does the vision see? What if behind the machine called Vision, there was another pair of eyes? A gaze belonging to someone who was once part of the race called humanity. Someone who has watched the future of his new world but knows less than he thinks. And so now, as the vision of Marvel, what will he do? What is his purpose? And how did he become ‘him’? With those questions plaguing his robotic mind, he wanders through the various possibilities of the said universe. His vibranium eyes peering at the world before him, with a glint of confusion and wonder. But power is not his only struggle. For in between all the various questions that his existence raises, one is something that he and a few others would like an answer to. Can an ‘artificial’ mind understand emotions if it once felt them?

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Op mc with infinity stone and system from the beginning, what can possibly posses a threat to him? Nothing, he can simply fly to the vast universe to get stronger, but no. He is f*cling around founding useless, weak characters and forming team with them to protect Earth. From Thanos ? Original Vision may suck, but our mc is different, he can use mind stone energy and cut Thanos in countless pieces. Also, go learn f*cling magic, teleport to his throne and kill him, while he has 1 infinity stone. 100 times easier than training useless team and slaying thanos in solo, while they shouting how cool mc is. Stop writing ch for word count, it was ok at the beginning (40ch), when there were interactions needed for the plot progress. Now they are only for word count, simply ocean of water.

Giving it a 3 star because it got boring real fast for me. Good writing and storytelling btw. I mean no hate or anything, this is a genuine criticism.

Just a typical marvel fic. No character development, Already OP MC, Interactions feel forced and confusing. 50 chapters and I feel that the story is barely progressing.If u have an OP MC i would expect world building or politics but this story fails to deliver both in any satisfying way. Any action the MC does feels like it doest have any consequence because he is op.

Have the potential to be a great story. Hope the author keeps the same pace.

Don't mind me ,just following the trend.

Few chapters out have been great and captivating. Hoping it sticks. I'mma just drop this and leave quietly

If the author is too lazy to at least TRY to write a bad story, then I am too lazy to try and say something bad about it. 5 Stars for the laziness

I'll leave this here for the time being.

Definitely pretty nice, don't let the first chapter fool you, I can see that it's starting to become greater than I initially thought. Go ahead and read it.

this fanfic has too much filler mumblings, and worse author is going open marvel world like he is planing to write 2000 chapters CN novel instead of focus on characters of interest author keeps pulling more characters we don't care about for screen time and the ones we care to read about are nowehere to be found in this fanfic thor tony hulk are basically gone steve apears rarely and shortly wanda vision romance? not before the sun shape shift to white Dwarf this fanfic is still readable if you skip most of the lines that are not dialogue but can't honestly rate this more than 2 star

it's a good so far keep up the good work 👍

Okay so before I review I want to eat everyone know that Vision doesn't have a PP... BUT! But he will! Comment the Kilometers it should have so the author notices😂. Jokes aside let's review and not give 1 star reviews based on one thing alone (You know who you are🙄). 1- Writing Quality: The story is very well written but I don't know if everything is grammatically correct in sentences but I honestly don't care about that since I'm here for good readable books and this is well written. The spacing is good, the differentiation between calls/comms, AI's and characters is well distinguished and there are few to no misspelled words. The only "downside" would be the word count that could be in a auxiliary chapter instead of an official one. [4 Stars Here] 2-Story Development: I consider story development as "Plot Progression" and having that in mind the plot is good and the start is a fun read. We see the MC overcoming his "death" because of his robotic processing and the mind stone so minor existential crisis but it was well played out. The only downside of the plot progression would be the length of each chapter (as of chapter 14), due to them being short/small not much happens in one chapter if we go about it individual. [4 Stars Here] 3-Character Design: Character design for me is the combination of personality (how they act), their socializations (superficial npc's vs actual characters) and their interactions (what they do) and this one so far has been a great point with the integration/override of the MC in Vision, to his growth as a character to how he deals with other people. The other characters have depth if I can call it that and it feels good to read and not at all forced. [5 Stars Here] 4-Updating Stability: We get chapters daily, can't complain and I'm loving it. [5 Stars Here] 5-World Background: This to be is the setting of the scenes, the details in the background and where the fricks the characters are and this is done so well I won't even rant about it. [5 Stars Here] Overall: 4.6 Opinion: I honestly expected this to be a flop, can't say it won't be with how authors end up either dropping (sometimes they call it hiatus) a book or derailing the story till the initial engagement the readers had ends up dying and I sincerely hope this isn't one of those cases but time will tell but if this book ends up being dropped, going on a Hiatus or even derailing I'll make a new review and delete this one. My advice to everyone who stumbled here is just "read 5 chapters and decide if you enjoyed it till then or not." so take it with a grain of salt just don't give 5 star reviews with only "more more more more" like you want to fill up a word count and don't give 1 star reviews just because of one thing you didn't like, there's more to a story than just one thing.(

It is a beautifully written story that is engaging and has huge rereadabitlity. You can read it again and again without getting bored. The writer has a phenomenal knack for writing and phrasing words which dish out an excellent tale.