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LordOfEmpathy
LordOfEmpathyLv101yr
2023-07-06 13:22

Giving it a 3 star because it got boring real fast for me. Good writing and storytelling btw. I mean no hate or anything, this is a genuine criticism.

The Vision

QuackVader
4.3
140 Chs

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weslley
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Celleborn
CellebornLv2

If the author is to lazy to write a proper synopsis I am to lazy to read the fic. I don't say that to be mean, but come on, I just want to know the basic before I put my time into reading this.

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MimicReads
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Young_fruit_Smiley
Young_fruit_SmileyLv14

5 ⭐ for the idea. . 1 star for the massive word count that lets you post the book with only 3 chapters...

1yr
QuackVader
QuackVaderAuthor

Quack quack. Just wanted to drop the first review for my fic and nothing else. Feel free to ask me questions.

1yr
SnowApathie
SnowApathieLv4

If beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder, what then does the vision see? What if behind the machine called Vision, there was another pair of eyes? A gaze belonging to someone who was once part of the race called humanity. Someone who has watched the future of his new world but knows less than he thinks. And so now, as the vision of Marvel, what will he do? What is his purpose? And how did he become ‘him’? With those questions plaguing his robotic mind, he wanders through the various possibilities of the said universe. His vibranium eyes peering at the world before him, with a glint of confusion and wonder. But power is not his only struggle. For in between all the various questions that his existence raises, one is something that he and a few others would like an answer to. Can an ‘artificial’ mind understand emotions if it once felt them?

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Special_snowflake
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Sosynovsky
SosynovskyLv1

Op mc with infinity stone and system from the beginning, what can possibly posses a threat to him? Nothing, he can simply fly to the vast universe to get stronger, but no. He is f*cling around founding useless, weak characters and forming team with them to protect Earth. From Thanos ? Original Vision may suck, but our mc is different, he can use mind stone energy and cut Thanos in countless pieces. Also, go learn f*cling magic, teleport to his throne and kill him, while he has 1 infinity stone. 100 times easier than training useless team and slaying thanos in solo, while they shouting how cool mc is. Stop writing ch for word count, it was ok at the beginning (40ch), when there were interactions needed for the plot progress. Now they are only for word count, simply ocean of water.

1yr
Additiya_Bhandari
Additiya_BhandariLv4

Just a typical marvel fic. No character development, Already OP MC, Interactions feel forced and confusing. 50 chapters and I feel that the story is barely progressing.If u have an OP MC i would expect world building or politics but this story fails to deliver both in any satisfying way. Any action the MC does feels like it doest have any consequence because he is op.

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