Chapter 52

It was finally time.

With a click, The buy button lit up, indicating that it had been pressed.

[ Vampire Evolution has been bought ]

[ Proceed with Evolution ] [ Yes ] [ Cancel ]

Clicking the Yes button, Jack felt his already high excitement rise up even further.

[ Vampire Evolution has started ]

And right at that moment, Jack felt the same pain as when he had transitioned into a cold one hit him once more.

It was harrowing, to say the least, it felt like the only thing that existed in the world was pain.

His eyesight started getting cloudy and before long darkness overtook his sight.

Soon enough his hearing left him as well and the sense of touch, smell, and taste soon left as well.

Jack didn't know how much time had passed, didn't know how much more he would have to endure, to him it felt like an eternity as he was surrounded by nothing besides the harrowing pain.

Outwardly changes had also started appearing as Jack's body started convulsing involuntarily.

His nails lengthened at first and soon his fangs followed suit.

His eyes were wide open even though he couldn't see and the pupils inside soon started to change.

His iris's color had already been red from his previous transformation however now it had started to change color once more.

The bright red color turned darker, into dark vermillion, and his pupils which had been round, human-like, started to change.

They thinned and thinned until they became a vertical slit, similar to those of a feline.

His face which was considered human in its beauty started to change as well as the bones in his face started restructuring themselves.

The sight was horrid, straight out of a horror movie, if anyone were to see the Jack right now as his bones wiggled inside his body and transformed themselves then they would have most likely gotten the fright of their lifetime.

The changes soon completed themselves and his once handsome face turned almost inhumane, it was hard to tell if he should be called handsome or beautiful.

The muscles were the next part to change as they started expanding and constricting quickly.

And soon their mass itself started to grow as Jack's thin frame started filling up, turning into what most would call a highly athletic build.

With this final change, Jack finally stopped convulsing on the bed.

He didn't wake up immediately however, his mind and very soul were the next in line.

Jack had been awake, his consciousness had never once fallen asleep throughout the whole transformation, and whilst the bodily changes were gruesome, what was to come next was far greater on the scale of pain.

As soon as the physical pain stopped abruptly, a new one came to replace it.

Jack felt his very mind and soul start to get crushed, he felt like he was going to die, no Jack wanted to die, anything to get rid of this pain, however, his pleas didn't change anything.

The pain continued.

And continued until finally after four hours, it all came to a stop just as abruptly as it had started.

*Huff*

Releasing harsh breaths, Jack snapped his eyes open, the ceiling of his room comming into view.

'My sight hasn't improved much' That was Jack's first thought as he stood still on the bed looking at the ceiling.

And then he tried to sit up from his laid-down position.

*Bang*

And the next moment, his head was inside the wall in front of his bed.

Slowly and very carefully Jack raised his arms to hold onto the wall before getting his head out of it carefully.

He had just destroyed the wall of his apartment, however, Jack wasn't mad, in fact, he was ecstatic from joy as he lowered his head to look at his body.

What was once a normal almost thin body had turned into a toned athletic one that made Jack feel like he could do anything.

'If I struggled against the Cullens before then I could obliterate them all now, but the question is am I strong enough to face those two' Jack thought as his mind wandered back to the scene he had witnessed.

'I don't know, without actually meeting them again, it's impossible for me to accurately tell.' 

Turning around Jack walked to the bed to sit down once more, this time his strength had already come under his control and he didn't destroy anything else.

The intelligence stat gave him the ability to calculate the exact amount of power that he needed to use from his body in order to walk normally, it also made it so that his control over his bodily functions was almost perfect.

In fact, this aspect had been improved even further, his processing abilities had grown alongside every other stat with his new evolution.

Sitting down on the bed, Jack opened up his status panel to see the new changes.

[ Name: Jack Sparrow ]

[ Race: Vampire ]

[ Age: 17 ]

[ S.P.E.C.I.A.L ]

[ Strength: 5/10 ] [ 0/100 ]

[ Perception: 5/10 ] [ 0/100 ]

[ Endurance: 5/10 ] [ 0/100 ]

[ Charisma: 3/10 ] [ 52/100 ]

[ Intelligence: 10/10 ] [ 100/100 ]

[ Agility: 6/10 ] [ 0/200 ]

[ Luck: 9/10 ] [ 0/100 ]

[ Status Points: 6 ]

[ Shop Coins: 22 ]

'Seems like I've lost the newborn buffs, however, though my stats are lower than what they were, I'm actually stronger. Charisma shouldn't be a problem now even when I'm talking to Cold Ones, even though it's at 3.' Jack thought as he analyzed his stats quickly before opening the next system menu.

[ Skills ]

[ Animal Instinct ] [ Level 2 ]

[ Vampire Observation ] [ Level 2 ]

[ Video Gamer ] [ Level 2 ]

[ Killing Intent Sense ] [ Level 1 ]

[ Ability Negator ]

[ Justice ] 

[ Vampiric Regeneration ] [ Level 1 ]

[ Transformation ] [ Level 1 ]

[ Blood Manipulation ] [ Level 1 ]

And the already large smile on Jack's face, grew larger into a toothy grin as he read the text.

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I tried to improve my writing from the last time Jack transformed but I don't know if I did well or not, at least I can hope I did decently.

I hope you guys liked this chapter and are enjoying the way the fanfic is going.

Now, this Jack is overpowered but trust me when I say that this isn't an OP MC fanfic, he's still just a frog in a well in this world.

I already mentioned this a few times but I will be taking the twilight world and adding a lot of stuff, it will all be monster/supernatural/mythological creature related and a lot of it will be original. I just wanted to say this again so that i warn people who absolutley despise original stuff.

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