After receiving a valuable critical review, as well as advice from the editor, I decided to rewrite 6 chapters. I have already rewritten the first one. I hope to rewrite the second chapter today. Therefore, probably updating the new chapter will drag on until Sat, but I will try to write two new chapters until Sunday inclusive.
The plot also changes somewhat, but the essence is the same. Changing the text of the first 6 chapters published is done so that they are less rigid, easier to understand and read from the point of view of literature. This is attempt number 3, well, and there is already likely, attempt number 4 will
I hope for the understanding of readers.