Supernatural: The Great Hunter System

Rapid change of pov, an mc that changes personality every five seconds and cringe dialogue make this almost unreadable.

the story is decent but you really don't know what kind of MC you are dealing with. hes made good choices, stupid ones, and questionable ones. he seems to be a bit of a slave to the system as well sometimes and it reflects in the choices he makes. I feel like he's headed toward the cliche morally ambiguous MC that's been extra popular on this app. problem is a story without a framework and without boundaries usually starts losing its steam after losing its mystery. Story is predictably unpredictable, usually by adding a twist at the end up chapters by leaving readers out of the MCs thought process when he makes certain choices earlier in the story. seems like a cheap writing trick but just writing is impressive in its own right. Story is still pretty new so my review might change later. Story is overall pretty good and id suggest giving it a read before judging it.

Welcome back Bro. I was waiting for an update. Hope you can finish this book [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update]

I'm just making it 10...XD 4|4|4|4|5 (cough... I'm a bit partial because there weren't many supernatural fics lately...longer ones at least) I read this a while back, it got kinda mid. Also, I thought it was dropped. i might change the review after rereading it...

Good story but the dialogue is choppy and confusing at times

epic start bro keep it going................

I’m just sad author decided to implode themself in writing quality for the protagonist. He degrades in quality as time progresses. It’s like the rotting of your favorite. Natural as it may seem it is a pity all the same

personaly not a fan of changing the pow every couple lines, it makes the story feel super slow , other than that abit unneeded details like pow from the maid and his sister this just made me skip alot of dialogs. not realy a fan of this writeting where 70% of the chapters dialog is from a side character ,only readed 10chap hope it changes somwhat. otherwise very desent

It's great to see another supernatural writer,I have my own supernatural FanFiction but it's a bit low,I started following yours recently and I hope I can get some inspiration from it,thank you very much......❤️❤️

nah man you have really got to never give up on this book,,,, it's a work of pure genius I love it,,,,hey now you gotta promise you'll finish it or else🫵🏾,,,,keep up the good work

When I first started reading this book a year or so back I dropped it after a couple of chapters due to the main character's personality but I decided to give it another chance about a month ago and trust me when I say this is the perfect definition of a story that gets better with time. it has a rocky start but boy i don't regret reading this story to those who are wanting to read this but are either hesitating or were turned off at the begining like me, all I can say is to keep on reading even if certain parts are cringe or just annoying IT GETS BETTER. and to the author keep it up this story is a good one[img=update][img=update][img=recommend]

This story is great. It really feels like supernatural. The MC is a mix of personalities between Dean and Sam. The only thing i didnt like so far is that he had always been a cautious man. He is like constant vigilance incarnate. Preparing so much for an action. But what i dont understand is why would he go to an island full of demons, 1 low level angel, hellhounds, witches and a goddamn Prince of Hell. He went there with no prep and only brought his servant who was probably around the same power levels that he was.

Sinceramente a história estava aceitável até o capítulo 81 e depois daí eu n tive nenhuma vontade de ler mais, muito clichê, n gosto de MC com complexos de Deus q se coloca em situações impossíveis onde tudo acontece de forma a acabar com qualquer preparação possível p ensinar algum tipo de lição absurdamente estúpida pra o MC, sinceramente achei q fosse ter um aneurisma... Mesmo assim foi uma boa história até o ponto q n quis ler mais.

A great book with a consistent story and long chapters. Some grammatic errors but it doesn't take away from the story