Silas Brenner is a former bank robber who dies after a being betrayed. However after meeting the dark god Akaloth he is reborn in the star wars universe and has to survive through cunning and power with the help of his wish. A/n :This is my first time writing and it's obviously going to be awkward at first so I'd love some feedback. I'll try my best to upload two chapters a day. :) I don't own any characters from the star wars universe.
Walking through the winding streets of Curasconts criminal underbelly, Mace neared the force signature hidden between a narrow alley hidden between two lively nightclubs that shone with neon lights.
In contrast to the street outside, the alley's oppressive darkness made Mace second guess if there was really anyone inside.
Neverless he walked towards the force signature emmiting from beneath a thin blanket huddled up beside a wall.
Step, step, step
Mace deliberately made his footsteps louder.
"H-hello, w-whos there!" A young voice entered mace's ears as he saw a young boy about 3 years old with brown eyes and hair pull down the blanket and look at him with weary eyes.
"Don't worry young one, I'm here to offer you something I think you'd like."Mace crouched down and lifted his robes to reveal his light saber, causing the young boys eyes to light up in wonder and reverence.
" YOUR A JEDI !" The young boy seems to almost scream on instinct.
"Shhh...and yes I am,"Mace quickly responded before he observed the boy closer and realised that he appeared to be living in this alley.
"Boy, where are your parents?"he asked with clear concern.
"SNIFF....sniff...I don't know, they disappeared and haven't come back"
Drip...drip..drip
Tears fell down as he recounted his story.
"So it's that again...sigh," Mace recounted his fruitless investigation into the recent disappearences before turning his attention back to the crying boy,"I'm sure there still out there somewhere...but if you'd like you can come to the jedi temple and learn how to uphold peace and justice, would you like that?"
"Sniff...sniff... really? I can be a jedi?" A look of hope returned to the boys tear filled eyes as he looked at winu.
"Of course you can, one day you might be a master like me,"Mace continued as he noticed the excitement in the boys eyes,"so what do you say boy, are you coming?"Mace extended his hand out to the yoing man.
"YES!" An immediate response came as a tiny hand grabbed mace's," I'll become the most powerful jedi in history, just wait!"
"Ohh...then you'll have to beat me first, hahaha"Mace laughed as he began walking out the alley with a boy following.
"By the way, what's your name?"The jedi master asked.
"Aizen...Aizen Sosuke."
(A.N. When Silas is in his jedi role I'll refer to him as Aizen.)
3 years later....Jedi Temple training room
'tch, these weaklings never give up huh.' ducking beneath a right hook about to strike his face, he used his crouching position to apply force to his left leg and leapt off the ground with his right knee raised.
BANG...
The last of the 5 fellow younglings slumped to the ground as his brain rocked from the knee that greeted his chin.
"AIZEN, YOU'VE DONE EXACTLY WHAT I TOLD YOU NOT TO!" Kenobi looked at the scattered students in the room.He had left the room to grab some notes for the class he was teaching for 5 minutes before returning to his students sleeping peacefully on the floor.
"Sigh... you know Master Windu isn't going to be happy about this right?" Kenobi had long been delighted to teaching physical education classes to younglings as a part of his preparation for becoming an apprentice to Quigon, however when he discovered that he was teaching a class with he quickly realised why every other jedi instructor would come out of their respective classes with a look of defeat.
Aizen was unparalleled prodigy in almost every area among his age group both in terms of sheer intelligence and combat ability, however in study classes he often could be heard snoring on his desk, while in combat class lessons he was often reprimanded for leaving the other students in the infirmary.
He was the top student in the jedi temple and often received private lessons with Mace Windu much to the envy of the other younglings who tried their best to outperform him.
"what was I suppose to do when these idiots gang up on me?", "recite the jedi code?"
Aizen wore an irritated look as he questioned.
"Anything else but this," Kenobi replied before he recalled what Master Yoda said to him,"anyway we'll talk about your actions later, You must be at Master Yoda's quarters in half an hour,"
He looked at the younglings on the floor and quickly added,"also, take your classmates to the infirmary."
"Fine."
30 minutes later...
'This must be it."Aizen thought as he walked into Yoda's room for the first time since he came into the temple.
Creak..
The door opened to reveal a space coated in darkness while the space light from the closed shuttes shone onto what Aizen thought looked similar to a goblin in the games he played back on Earth.
"Hmm...trouble you have caused again, show restraint you should,"Yoda started his usual lecture as Aizen sat down on a chair opposite to him,"You must learn to let go of your anger Aizen, or controlled you will be."
Yoda didn't care too much about Aizens behaviour as it was normal for a 6 year old to act rebellious.
"Of course Master, I still have a long way to go before I can call myself a jedi." Aizen spoke with respect and humility, however his thoughts displayed the exact opposite,'what a fucking snob... I'd like to see you lecture me about anger when I rip you in half.'
"Humility is the start to any journey Aizen, a model jedi you will become," Yoda didn't forget to praise before moving on to the main topic he wanted to discuss,"heading to Illum, you are," Yoda noticed Aizens eyes widen in excitement and continued "build your lightsaber, you shall."
Kyber crystals was a material that Aizen had a deep interest in obtaining and was a key reason why he decided to infiltrate the jedi order.
"Thank you for this opportunity Master Yoda," bowing his head in thanks Aizen," I'll serve the jedi order for as long as this temple stands."
Yoda remained oblivious to Aizens sinister undertones and responded,"patience you must have, show you your darkest fears the force will."
"Of course Master Yoda, I'll keep that in mind." Wearing a gratefull expression Aizen continued,"when will we leave?"
"Tomorrow afternoon, we will. You may leave now, get some rest you should."
Hearing this Aizen calmly left his chair and walked to the exit and spoke before exiting,"May the force be with you, Master Yoda."
"May the force be with you, Aizen."
So I'm struggling with charecter interactions. When I'm writing it feels fine but when I proofreed it feels awkward, can't tell if it's just because I wrote it tho.
If you have any advice please feel free to comment ;)