Rising Shadows: Uchiha's Wrath

I really enjoyed this book waiting for more chapters to be released, and it is spoiler-free i really enjoy Uchiha's and Kaito's revenge against Leaf Village.

So far my fav book. I am waiting for Uchiha's Revenge. Looking forward to Kaito's future with Uchiha, Are they gonna leave Konoha and make their own village or Is Uchiha gonna see a new hokage with their clansmen... very excited for the future of this book.

Not bad, too few chapters, translation pace far too slow, average quality (odd phrasing and some of the wording seems off to me), although the subject is really good, it's another uchiha fanfic with the MC seriously defending his clan. I'd say it's a good read if this theme is to your taste and if you don't mind a very slow publication rate.

A single fight taking over 20 chapters is beyond silly. The amount of fillers is disgusting

Translation is a lot better then the other version, but there are still too many mistakes and it really breaks the flow of the story. A lot of seemingly missing or incorrect words and the grammar is also not great.

Why there is a villain tag and also a righteous tag too? Is he a villain or what?

may man, good job for translation of this fanfic as this is really giving you a headache, the story is good even in slow paced, but can you replace the other name of the other skills set as others is exaggerated or the name of the jutsu's or like, sorry i know im demanding and thank you for updating the chapter. Good luck

Ok new review , so i read till latest chapters , and this ff quality dropped than increased. I hope the fight didnt drag on too long. Spoiler alert: I'm book wise its a good for time pass but it leaves something in mouth like i wish it would be not too preditable. So yeah

I tried reading the other translation, and it gave me a whole new level of respect for your work. The other translation borders on being incomprehensible

Overall, the story is intriguing, with a unique take on the Uchiha clan's revenge and a system-driven narrative that adds an RPG-like twist. The translation quality is solid, making it easy to follow along without any significant language issues, which is definitely a plus. However, the pacing could use some improvement. The fight scenes, particularly the battles involving Hiruzen and Danzo, feel like they drag on for too many chapters. This slows down the overall flow of the story, and the villains, while well-written, sometimes come off as one-dimensional. Despite that, it's an enjoyable read for fans of the Uchiha clan and those who like system-based stories.

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i hope Itachi uchia and his parents come clean and I also hope they don't die

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The story is good. The other version is called destroy konoha at the start. I think that one has a slightly better translation. Though it has more Chinese aspects to it and some words are wrong, the grammar and chapter length are better. But as far as screening out cultural influences, this version is better. I would give both about the same rating in the end.