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Raptor2244
Raptor2244Lv141yr
2024-03-18 04:34

The story is good. The other version is called destroy konoha at the start. I think that one has a slightly better translation. Though it has more Chinese aspects to it and some words are wrong, the grammar and chapter length are better. But as far as screening out cultural influences, this version is better. I would give both about the same rating in the end.

Naruto: Uchiha Destroys Konoha at the Start.

Flowerhead_Evan
4.6
115 Chs

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Flowerhead_Evan
Flowerhead_EvanAuthor

*sigh* I tried my best to reomove the chinese aspects , but still thank you for review . If there are any mistake point them out , and i will correct them right away. if you any issues let me know I will try my best to improve the ff :)

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Tyki_mikk
Tyki_mikkModerator

I really enjoyed this book waiting for more chapters to be released, and it is spoiler-free i really enjoy Uchiha's and Kaito's revenge against Leaf Village.

1yr

ashie_letmein
ashie_letmeinLv1

So far my fav book. I am waiting for Uchiha's Revenge. Looking forward to Kaito's future with Uchiha, Are they gonna leave Konoha and make their own village or Is Uchiha gonna see a new hokage with their clansmen... very excited for the future of this book.

1yr
King_Jadelle
King_JadelleLv3

can the author pls post more chips of this novel I will really appreciate it.

21d
Dao_Singularity
Dao_SingularityLv4

Not bad, too few chapters, translation pace far too slow, average quality (odd phrasing and some of the wording seems off to me), although the subject is really good, it's another uchiha fanfic with the MC seriously defending his clan. I'd say it's a good read if this theme is to your taste and if you don't mind a very slow publication rate.

12mth
Flowerhead_Evan
Flowerhead_EvanAuthor

The shameless translator here :) Everyone rates their work, so why not? So here's a heads-up for anyone reading: I worked pretty hard on the MTL and the Chinese versions of this story. I may have lost a few brain cells due to the brain rot of MTL, but I put in the effort. There might be some issues, so feel free to point them out, and I will correct them. HOWEVER, if you come straight out trashing my translation, I won't hold back. Please provide a constructive argument for why something doesn't work rather than just calling it trash. Also, this isn’t a station where you just announce your departure without saying anything <.< Now to the story, MC is a neutral guy, he will unite five nations, and recruit talented people on his side. So look forward to it

3mth
_Lobo_
_Lobo_Lv3

may man, good job for translation of this fanfic as this is really giving you a headache, the story is good even in slow paced, but can you replace the other name of the other skills set as others is exaggerated or the name of the jutsu's or like, sorry i know im demanding and thank you for updating the chapter. Good luck

6mth
luiz_S
luiz_SLv2

I tried reading the other translation, and it gave me a whole new level of respect for your work. The other translation borders on being incomprehensible

7mth
Jordi_Hardiansyah
Jordi_HardiansyahLv1

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NowGoWithTheFlow
NowGoWithTheFlowLv14

Please continue this novel. I really appreciate an like this plot line. Not many fanfic of naruto write a plot like this an I don't want this to stop. Chapter are long, grammar is ok the plot is fantastic while updates regularly. One of the best naruto fanfic on this site.

2mth
Isaiah_Caudill
Isaiah_CaudillLv14

Please keep writing this novel it’s very good I hope you keep writing it!!!!!!!!! 🥳

3mth
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