The story is good, but it could be better
I have several things to do that would make the novel better
First, the pace in the novel is so fast that I'm reading a race and I'm not a novel. Try to slow the pace down a bit
Secondly, the conversations between the characters are very fast, short, and very brief, to the point that you feel that the person speaking is a robot and not a person. Try to make the conversation longer and do not try to make the conversation a question and answer only by making it closer to the method of discussing things or a dialogue between Characters
Thirdly, add the signs SLICEOFLIFE and OVERPOWERED to the summary, because they are appropriate for this novel
Fourth, the explanations that the main character gives to others are very simple and naive, such as when he told the story of how he discovered his strength, and this also did not answer them when they asked about his strength, but they accepted it.
Fifth, Alice's character in this novel does not look like Alice in the movie. Alice's character in this novel really looks like a 15- or 16-year-old girl who is in love with roses,Not alice the mature vampire who is over 100 years old and has the power to see the future
I hope that my review will be useful to you and please do not stop this novel