Rizki_Caturianto

It's a great Naruto fanfiction.. I love it 😍😍 It have a great storyline/plot and good english/translate (although there's quite a few times a chinese or different names.. it's still ok for me).. I liked that MC/Yagami not afraid to change.. He changed Uchiha fate.. He also change Hizashi fate.. It satisfying to see what happens to Danzo & 3rd Hokage (I don't know if comic Hiruzen is bad/evil or not, but he's really to soft to Danzo.. And quite bad in this story).. Hope the other Konoha advisor is get the downfall like Danzo and Hiruzen.. Love your story author sama.. Keep up the great work 😁👍😍😍

Maybe re upload from Dragonite vs Dragonite?? I'm just half read that chapter when suddenly it's dissapear 😭😭

I want to ask about this problem a few minutes ago Author san.. Why your pokemon story is gone?? Then I see that it was Webnovel who delete it.. Why they delete it?? Don't they say the cause?? Maybe you should ask webnovel You can re try again in here or change to scribble.. It's up to you.. I still will be your fans and read your story, either in webnovel or scribble 👍😍😍

I hope it will be harem.. He too focus with cooking to see the girls around him 😂 Personaly I like if he get Erina or Rindo (Food Wars), his childhood friend (i forget her name), and many more girl who like his cooking

It's a great Pokemon fanfiction!! I love it!!! 😍😍 It have a great storyline/plot and good english/translation.. The grammar is quite good too... I like this kind of story (slice of life with little fighting and adventure between).. I like that MC/Yuga continue his parent daycare (although that because his system, but it still great).. His system is good too, it give many reward to make MC daycare more success and famous (pokeblock recipe, incense recipe, Evolution Stone Vein, etc).. His quest is also relate to Daycare and not to forceful (it give a long time or no time limit).. I like MC is caught Pokemon with limitation (not destroy that pokemon ecosystem/not caught all of pokemon in one spesies).. There a few flaw, like the data of your pokemon is bad writing sometimes.. The inconsistent of he/she.. Not give a women/mate for MC.. Etc Love your story author sama.. Keep up the great work 👍😁😍😍😍

It's a good Game Maker fanfiction!! 👍 It have a good plot/storyline and good english/translation.. I like this kind of story.. To see what kind of game MC/John will make.. How he make it.. What reaction of the players, etc... Love your story author san.. Keep up the good job 😁👍😍😍

It's a really really great Fanfiction!! I love it!!! 😍😍 It have a really great story/plot and great english/translation.. The grammar is great too... It so interesting to see MC/Adrian became a God of Creativity and how he get a believer and prayer/Divine Point.. How he modify/advance his Internet.. How his interactions with his follower/believer, etc... I want to thanks author sama for how long is each chapters.. I think this will be one of my favourites story... Can't wait to see next chapter.. Love your story author sama.. Keep up the great work 😁👍😍😍😍

It's a great Fairy Tail fanfiction!! I love it!!! 😍😍 It have a great plot/storyline and good english/translation.. The grammar is great too... I love the idea of Magic Net/Internet in Magic World.. It's interesting to see what applications MC/Nate bring to Magic world.. I like his interactions with other Fairy Tail characters.. But I think he became OP so quickly.. Just a few months and he already have magic power as high as Laxus.. Keep up the great work author sama.. Love your story 😁👍👍😍😍😍

It's a great multiverse fanfiction!! 👍👍 It have a good plot/storyline and great english/translation.. The grammar is good too.. It's interesting and good story, but it will be greater if there's a little bit romance.. And make more MC daily life in Food Wars world (like cooking in his restourant, his costumer reaction, make new menu, etc)... He should use his power to focus to get unique ingredients in another worlds.. Love your story author san.. Keep up the good job 😁👍😍😍

Love it!! Love it!! Love it!!! 😍😍😍 This is one of the best (cooking & slice of life) fanfiction!!! 👍👍 It have a very great plot and great english/translation.. The grammar is good too... I like this kind of story (cooking & slice of life) where MC get system which improve his cooking skill little by little when he done his quest/mission.. MC/Sui system also give him an change to buy more fantasy ingredient which he already get first from mission/quest.. I think you should give him more fantasy recipe, he only have 5 for now?? I like so much MC/Sui interaction with others (Erina, Soma, Polaris dorm people, etc).. But I think you should give him more interactions in his original world people (Luna, his Rep Class, Utaha, etc), you don't forget that he still highschooler in his original world don't you author?? You make him so busy in Totsuki world, than he only back to his world to open his Snack Bar and sleep, than back to Totsuki world.. And why he don't go to 2nd world?? I think it's still ok if Tohru still with Kobayashi, he can do the 2nd mission by get fantasy ingredients from 2nd world.. He can befriend Tohru, Kobayashi, etc with his cooking skill.. Love your story author sama.. Keep up the great work 😁👍👍😍😍