Reincarnated in the world of One Piece

Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.

What? Apophis is one of the strongest figure in Egyptian mythology that embodies chaos, He is the enemy of Sun God Ra which is one of the most powerful figure in the Egyptian pantheon. and he doesnt eat the mythical zoan Apophis fruit? like there is nothing more stupid then that like how stupid can you be to keep that fruit saved up for a trashy crewmate anyway if you dont like stupid mc and such then dont read this cuz in my book that counts as stupid

well i dont know if this is translated or if the author is just bad with english but the writing is nigh unreadable. Add on the fact that it changes from 1st to 3rd point of view every other sentence and sometimes during the same sentence it is unreadable.

There are so many bads things about this fanfic I dont know where to start. First of all the author is a d##k lets get that put of the way, (not sure if this is translated but it doesnt matter). Second of all, the MC has a system but for some dumba## reason, Observation haki is more expensive than a GOD##N MYTHICAL ZOAN FRUIT. That is some of the biggest bs I have ever seen. Third of all, the MC gets the strongest mythical zoan fruit which is basically a serpent god that causes earthquakes and can eat the earth BUT he says he wants to give it to a crewmate😑 He is basically giving the power of a god to his crewmate while he is a puny little s##t. Fourth of all, the MC is actual s#um, he kills innocents and people for no reason, and he was just supposed to be your average Joe but nah out of nowhere this average guy kills people left and right including innocent villages without remorse....One of the worse fics I have ever read.

Brain no work good no more, bad novel hurt brain.

ok so the mc is stupid he doesnt eat the apophis fruit also i decided to add another review cuz i just noticed theres like 20 or 25 reviews of the same acc so seems like author or someone else is using alts to make 5 star reviews either the author deletes em or ill get my homies to spam 1 star reviews in return i dont like authors who keep fake reviews to make their rating look good

An arrogant MC with no common sense. I don't know if Author wanted him to be evil, but his actions don't make any sense. Rest of the characters don't seen any better.

Over 50 5-star reviews spammed by the same guy, no wonder this story has such a high rating even tho the others rate it as low as possible since this story is the worst I've read in a while.

Trash. Novel with No Brain MC. He want to give a powerful devil fruit instead of using himself as he had a chance to use 2 devil fruits. Just to prove MC power, Author massacre a branch with hundreds of Marnie over a little argument of 'why is he using pirate flag'. I mean he should have hosted the flag after going into sea and avoid a needless conflict. Author says that MC in his previous life he was anti-social. If you ask me, Mc is borderline psychopath who kills for little arguments.

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Hope it Author can release the origin this novel, because this novel looks like fanfic from chinese.

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Writing quality 1 zero if it weren’t bearable Updates okay i guess Story development okay i guessed bot too fast oafed and bot too slow Character design kinda sucks But still bearable World background its okay but it sucks the same time like i dont know how to explain it over all it sucks and Oaky at the same time

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Meh, just another one of those old system fics where the hero starts one shotting every antagonist he comes across. I dropped after 2 chapters itself. It was that boring

Dropped chapter 1 Reasons 1 many mistakes that are clear and simple 2 mc is an idiot, given free access to 6 techniques but doesn't want 2 of them because he believes he knows best

Don’t ever let these losers make you give up this story is a masterpiece. I love the mc psychopathic character which is what I hope will stay for ever and I recommend kids not to read this story cuz it’s for adults only!

Im sorry but the grammar mistakes are so bad it hurts my btain to try and figure out Please either hire an editor or start editing the chapters more before release