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Darius_Chromwell

Darius_Chromwell

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A simple hermit. Idk who keeps logging into my account and using up all of my spirit stones, but if your going to do that could you at least invite some people to level up the account. thanks!

2018-07-08 加入United States
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    Darius_Chromwell9 days ago
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    I have always been a big fan of CrossEdge’s works, so finding this on here is a pleasant surprise. CrossEdge tends to do things in a way that makes it work even when in a normal situation i would hate it, like the fact that i hate seeing multiple perspectives in a novel but here its almost like I want to see the whole story from those other characters prospectives. My favorite example of this is chapter 11 from Venelana’s pov made me kinda want to read another fanfic with her as the protagonist and I don’t even personally like to read female protagonist novels.

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    Darius_Chromwell10 days ago
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    Never played league of legends or watched more than one episode of arcane but I like this story, system is interesting too which helps, I think it could do with having the system show up a little more often but I understand that the author doesn’t want it to be the most prominent part of the novel.

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    Darius_Chromwell17 days ago
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    This is a fanfiction, either do whatever other authors tend to do and rename the game you’re plagiarizing to something else or move this to the fanfiction section and remove the monetization.

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    Darius_Chromwell21 days ago
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    It started out kinda nice, I’ve always liked the whole novels extra genre so I enjoyed it for the first 20 or so chapters, but the main character has way too many plot twists in his backstory that I just lost interest, not to mention that he’s seeing psychological ghosts of himself from his past life… nah I’m good.

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    Darius_Chromwell23 days ago
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    I think I had a brain aneurysm trying to read this, I’ve seen monkeys write better quality things than whatever cheap Machine translation program you used to translate this garbage.

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    Darius_Chromwella month ago
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    Update 40 chapters in, it’s starting to feel a bit skewed, the interactions between characters in particular feel (disconnected) don’t know if that’s the right word.

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    Darius_Chromwella month ago
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    The MC’s list of known aliases continue to grow. Knight who is also known as Nate may have previously been accused of being Kate. The investigation continues to look into further aliases of the accused.

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    Darius_Chromwella month ago
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    I absolutely enjoy a minecraft fanfic, a marvel crossover is a bonus. But if the Mc literally becomes a GOD within the first few chapters, and then gets married to a woman who he just met like 5 minutes ago…. Yeah no. I can already see this as just another throw away smut novel that’ll probably get dropped like 30 chapters in. Ahh well, here’s hoping the next minecraft fanfic I find will be decent.

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    Darius_Chromwella month ago
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    Phenomenal work, I’m a huge fan of Harry Potter fanfics and to throw in some Witcher aspects especially in such a clean way that it feels seamless has made this one of my new favorites, i look forward to seeing more from this masterpiece!

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    Darius_Chromwell2 months ago
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    I've not even read the fanfic yet and you have already earned a 5 Star review from me simply based on the Synopsis! GG my good fellow.