Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.

well i dont know if this is translated or if the author is just bad with english but the writing is nigh unreadable. Add on the fact that it changes from 1st to 3rd point of view every other sentence and sometimes during the same sentence it is unreadable.

There are so many bads things about this fanfic I dont know where to start. First of all the author is a d##k lets get that put of the way, (not sure if this is translated but it doesnt matter). Second of all, the MC has a system but for some dumba## reason, Observation haki is more expensive than a GOD##N MYTHICAL ZOAN FRUIT. That is some of the biggest bs I have ever seen. Third of all, the MC gets the strongest mythical zoan fruit which is basically a serpent god that causes earthquakes and can eat the earth BUT he says he wants to give it to a crewmate😑 He is basically giving the power of a god to his crewmate while he is a puny little s##t. Fourth of all, the MC is actual s#um, he kills innocents and people for no reason, and he was just supposed to be your average Joe but nah out of nowhere this average guy kills people left and right including innocent villages without remorse....One of the worse fics I have ever read.

Brain no work good no more, bad novel hurt brain.

ok so the mc is stupid he doesnt eat the apophis fruit also i decided to add another review cuz i just noticed theres like 20 or 25 reviews of the same acc so seems like author or someone else is using alts to make 5 star reviews either the author deletes em or ill get my homies to spam 1 star reviews in return i dont like authors who keep fake reviews to make their rating look good

An arrogant MC with no common sense. I don't know if Author wanted him to be evil, but his actions don't make any sense. Rest of the characters don't seen any better.

Trash. Novel with No Brain MC. He want to give a powerful devil fruit instead of using himself as he had a chance to use 2 devil fruits. Just to prove MC power, Author massacre a branch with hundreds of Marnie over a little argument of 'why is he using pirate flag'. I mean he should have hosted the flag after going into sea and avoid a needless conflict. Author says that MC in his previous life he was anti-social. If you ask me, Mc is borderline psychopath who kills for little arguments.

Over 50 5-star reviews spammed by the same guy, no wonder this story has such a high rating even tho the others rate it as low as possible since this story is the worst I've read in a while.

Dumb mc stupid english and a whole lot of other problems 💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎