Reincarnated in the Nakano Family with Sign-in System

good so far but the mc is too vegetarian, ichika wanted to do it with him but he refused saying it's gross for siblings. then said you shouldn't joke like that. making him naive. what's the point of putting the mc in that family and making them like him but not doing anything.

the story was going nicely but the author wanted to earn some money so , the author decide to release some chapters in her patr*on which resulted in not so immersive story telling, also introduction of too many female leads led to bad story telling. The story is going no where. The harem is becoming like Pokémon "gotta catch em all" which is very bad, and there is very less story progression now. MC with all the power and money doing nothing with it and adding them to the story does not do any merit for the fic. I am reviewing this after reading 60+ chapters. I will try to read a bit more and if the story improve I will edit my review again but for now its not going very good. I understand the author wants to earn money which is not a bad thing in my opinion , but when u want to add monetized content , the author have to remember that it doesn't effect the story. For monetization a bonus chapter which doesn't effect the story is good but by how the author is doing , it destroying the flow of the fic.

It seems the author is a fan of Ghostyz if anyone know about that name. Writing quality: so bad, even if i turn my barin cell off, it still hurts. mc personality: typical naive and idiotic protagonist with OP powers. I already read this till chapter 55 and there's no improvement with the writing. Well, ciao guys have fun reafing this.

The main problem with this novel is that its protagonist is too flat, with a basic personality and no charisma, he basically gets carried away by the whole environment and the only times he shows character is for nonsense. a super overpowered system that gives you power just by breathing (sarcasm, you actually have to walk) and after 50 chapters he sets up a group chat since he ran out of ideas. It has some good moments (not enough to read all the chapters). I recommend rewriting the book from scratch, putting the system, the powers, the supernatural world and the daily life part in order.

The author tried to copy another writer named Akikan For those who know them it is the same formula that only goes wrong, since he writes after the march putting the concepts where they fall. Siscones, group chat (chapter 50), lots of girls, long plots, a system that leaves the protagonist super strong (it's mostly a life ricom, power is not relevant 90% of the time)

劇透

I hope you don't drop this book.........

Horrible story with an immature mc who gets op cheats like candies and yet still can't even wipe his own a** properly. A hodgepodge world background and characters lacking proper character growth. Mc is hypocritical to the max and criticizes other reincarnators even while doing pretty much the same thing unconsciously. He's like a nouveau rich who won the lottery openly criticizing others who are actually trying hard to get somewhere in their lives (even if some of their methods goes against their own morals).

Don't bother, the author just wants money, plus it's a multiverse in the DXD world where there will be young masters who want the sisters to be their wives. Also the story is a no no... in chapter 15 they killed Ichika and ate his limbs.

I don't recommend this for those of you who don't like cringe MCs with a bad sense of humor. The MC in this book is like Rio SeireiGensouki but a more annoying disgusting version named Akira. The MC is a big baby, he obviously has a harem, but he's so hypocritical and keeps making other girls he hasn't eaten wait for so long; just for the MC's stupid inner drama like character development? There's not even any character development at all, I think the MC's personality just changes so inconsistently that I can't stand it every time Akira speaks. Hahaha I'm serious, Akira is so annoying when he speaks and I always cringe with his every word which is expected from Indonesians - although I'm also Indonesian, but my cringe level is not that high!

Well, the author is a newbie trying to mix rocom and supernatural (DxD) and can't get both worlds to interact well. The system is unnecessary, its few moments of utility could well be changed for other concepts, the mc of chapter 10 is already at the country level, the fights are a minor issue in the whole story, as for Chapter 50 I put some dimensional talk already that I ran out of ideas.

La verdad que tenía potencial pero el MC no tiene ninguna meta interesante, no explora otros sistema de poder que hay, no sé por qué agregaste DXD no tienen sentido para empezar con el poder que libera ophis ya lo habría encontrado ase rato. La historia es muy lenta, te centras en la vida diaria,para eso solo lo hubieras hecho con animes sin poderes y que sea un mundo común. Mi opinión sin ofender.

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I should have known it would be like this through the previous book, the MC was too indecisive and lacked motivation or purpose. Just collecting pokemon what's more, some important content needs to be accessed through patre*n, I know you want to have money but it's just not satisfying.

劇透

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