Cleiton_Sena_6677

I hope this sister is an antagonist or villain in this story, because if you want us to have sympathy for her later it will be very difficult (Google Translator)

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Just a quick question, there won't be a chapter for each battle, right? 💀

Coward

Dai Yuhao and Huo Mubai...

Bro, how does his system work? in terms of statistics? 10 chapters have already passed and you haven't even explained anything yet (Google Translate)

Not to sound like a serious offense, but the author doesn't know how to write a story, does he? So far all the events are messed up, making it seem like the author wrote a bunch of separate scenes and just put them together in some way.

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Bro, I was really waiting for this moment, when the MC meets the traveler and starts traveling or accompanying her, but now I'm scared of it ruining the story for me, Lumine and Paimon have very low charisma, and since they When they arrived, the protagonist was just losing space, and even when he does something important, I feel like he is no longer the protagonist of this story, in short, I will continue to follow him to see if it improves, but since the arrival of the traveler, this story has deteriorated a lot in quality (Google Translator)

This constant changing of character names is very annoying, I know it's more annoying to keep looking at each name to see if it's in Japanese or Chinese, but if it continues like this it will start to get boring after a while and make reading difficult.