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Reincarnated in RWBY as Weiss Schnee (Rewriting)

作者: Nyx_nom
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After watching Rwby V9 Ep8 spoilers on tiktok, Jess gets hooked on the show and starts watching it but what happens when she goes to sleep and wakes up as a certain someone with white hair. (I don’t own Rwby it belongs to Rooster Teeth except for my OCs) Will also be written on royalroad, scribblehub, and Wattpad.

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Chapter 1Hello again!

I finally have my own personal laptop so that's amazing and I'm going to be making changes to the story so that it makes more sense and cover up some plot holes. I'm gonna unpublish the chapters and upload the fixed one's in hope of a better story (Ima try if I can't then I'll leave this up and make a new version to start over).

I'm not gonna do patreon again. I also don't like how I change my mind so much on things like love interest I didn't really have a plan but I'm sure now that I only want Ruby as the love interest so no Pyrrha sorry. Some abilities might have to go as well as changing her original background as I was coming up with some stuff as I was writing the chapters so I'm gonna make a full background so that it doesn't contradict with things later on. 

As for chapter length it's gonna be random I'll try to keep it at a similar word count every time but I'm not gonna push myself to make it longer because that's kind of what ruined it for me and felt more like work than a fun hobby to enjoy so you get what you get and if you don't like it oh well read another story and don't complain cause I'll just be blunt, delete it, or ignore you I really won't care.

Original readers if you're still gonna continue reading thank you for putting up with my indecisiveness and I hope that this new version of the story is better than the original.

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While overall good I think it has some flaws. Before I start to dog on the author I wanna say that the grammer is good and so are the fights. It seems to have a direction it wants to go in as well. (I hope). I think the romance main lead is fine too. -(little bit of spoilers but not really)- But, her powerups don’t really sense to me. Like she says she developed a new healing glyph because Jess was a genius and stuided medical textbooks in her free time, but Weiss is also a genius in her own right. So I would assume that adding healing to her powers would be something she already tried and couldn’t do. It’s not like Jesses worlds tec was better because remnant is at the same tec level so they would have the same level of medical advasment. Also her semblance is passed down from dna, your telling me no one eles tried this? The barrier power makes more sense (although still far fetched) because she got the idea from an anime and it’s original. -spoilers below if you care- Taking over the company also entirely gets rid of the reason she is even going to becon in first place, now her reason for leaving her home are flimsy at best because her father no has power over her. Also getting the scar was kinda stupid too, like I can get being traumatize so she just freezes like a deer in headlights, but her aura just doesn’t do anything? It’s supposed protect you even when you don’t actually try to protect yourself. If she didn’t have aura she shouldn’t have her semblance ether.

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